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eduscholtens
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2020-09-15 10:08

It started fine, had a lot of cliches and was okay as a read whenever there is nothing else to read. But then the autor started to have some problems in logically developing the world, such as: the goverment can’t judge sound magicians since they’re uncommon, but every other type is fine, and: homossexuality was banned since they needed to repopulate. If the autor focused on quality, this story might have been a 4 to 4.5/5

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Cut_Sleeve
Cut_SleeveLv5

Wait the Author actually stated this in his story "homossexuality was banned since they needed to repopulate" ???

HotRedFlaming
HotRedFlamingLv3

couldnt say I wouldnt agree with the banning of homosexuality in that situation. (not a homophobe)

eduscholtens
eduscholtensLv3

Well, why do you think that banning homosexuality would cause the population to increase?

HotRedFlaming:couldnt say I wouldnt agree with the banning of homosexuality in that situation. (not a homophobe)
HotRedFlaming
HotRedFlamingLv3

I assume homosexual pairings then could be yes, and that might force the Bis to have hetero pairings.

eduscholtens:Well, why do you think that banning homosexuality would cause the population to increase?
eduscholtens
eduscholtensLv3

The author wrote that. Whether he has changed it or not, I don’t know.

Cut_Sleeve:Wait the Author actually stated this in his story "homossexuality was banned since they needed to repopulate" ???
eduscholtens
eduscholtensLv3

Fair enough, but repressing homosexuality could cause a lot of disorder to happen in a collapsing society. Considering that an overwhelming majority of people are heterosexual (80-90% in most countries), bisexuals would account for about 5%, give or take. So, out of 100 couples, by repressing a minority group and increasing chaos you can go from 90 couples to 95. Not to mention that there must be a lot of orphans.

HotRedFlaming:I assume homosexual pairings then could be yes, and that might force the Bis to have hetero pairings.
HotRedFlaming
HotRedFlamingLv3

Even if I was thinking of a story of the human population on the verge of collapse this idea about homo banning never crossed my mind. Though this plot device may be good on BL stories. I found it odd to see it in this kind of book.

eduscholtens:Fair enough, but repressing homosexuality could cause a lot of disorder to happen in a collapsing society. Considering that an overwhelming majority of people are heterosexual (80-90% in most countries), bisexuals would account for about 5%, give or take. So, out of 100 couples, by repressing a minority group and increasing chaos you can go from 90 couples to 95. Not to mention that there must be a lot of orphans.
DaoistVzWJo5
DaoistVzWJo5Lv1

The author is stupid, why banned homosexual if it allows harem (it has harem tag). Don't tell me other people don't know harem in united asia. they can **** several women then reproduce so easy

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