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kryllsama
kryllsamaLv54yr
2020-02-29 05:46

its nice to have a mc that is caring but pls dont give hinata to the mc... as the story progress she will be the only anchor for naruto to be the person he is to become... the rest are fun to read and even if this novel will be premium, im willing to continue reading this.

Shinobi Fenrir

Lain_Walker
4.6
58 Chs

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Lain_Walker
Lain_WalkerAuthor

Thank you so much for the review and the support kryllsama 😁 well I plan to grow a romance theme but if ever the MC gets Hinata as his lover, I also won't forget the development of the other characters. Thank you again and have a great day man 😁✌

4yr
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Lain_Walker
Lain_WalkerAuthor

Thank you so much for the review and the support kryllsama 😁 well I plan to grow a romance theme but if ever the MC gets Hinata as his lover, I also won't forget the development of the other characters. Thank you again and have a great day man 😁✌

4yr
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Jake_Kidd
Jake_KiddLv14

Very true

4yr
Ezael
EzaelLv4

Naruto is what it is thanks to Sasuke * shaking shoulders *

4yr
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DUMBASS.....make no mistake...this is dope.....so far its dope but why dumbass,,,cause writer is one....I just binged this **** and loved it...but I only found this by luck....who the hell puts a fanfic in MR? wrong genre.....author put it in FF....more people will love this ****............also build romance....keep it happy and fluff....MC must be one man army....god damn lone wolf......keep harem small just no NTR or shallow romance.........**: give MC some BS power to match up against eyes that manipulate reality....also......world travel would be dope

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