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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv44yr
2020-02-25 19:04

DUMBASS.....make no mistake...this is dope.....so far its dope but why dumbass,,,cause writer is one....I just binged this **** and loved it...but I only found this by luck....who the hell puts a fanfic in MR? wrong genre.....author put it in FF....more people will love this ****............also build romance....keep it happy and fluff....MC must be one man army....god damn lone wolf......keep harem small just no NTR or shallow romance.........**: give MC some BS power to match up against eyes that manipulate reality....also......world travel would be dope

Shinobi Fenrir

Lain_Walker
4.6
58 Chs

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Lain_Walker
Lain_WalkerAuthor

Well it's my very first Fanfic and the very first time i installed the app was when i posted it. When i decided to post it here in Webnovel i didn't know that it needs the proper genre so when i saw the novel genre i just picked it. 😅 how can i change it to the FF section? I've tried searching how to do it but unfortunately i haven't found a proper solution yet. Also thank you so much for the time and review. 😁

4yr
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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

just continue,,,,,,,,,,,,,GL BRU

Lain_Walker:Well it's my very first Fanfic and the very first time i installed the app was when i posted it. When i decided to post it here in Webnovel i didn't know that it needs the proper genre so when i saw the novel genre i just picked it. 😅 how can i change it to the FF section? I've tried searching how to do it but unfortunately i haven't found a proper solution yet. Also thank you so much for the time and review. 😁
4yr
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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

I only know how to do it in computer..and its just there..like the tab next to novels.............?

Lain_Walker:Well it's my very first Fanfic and the very first time i installed the app was when i posted it. When i decided to post it here in Webnovel i didn't know that it needs the proper genre so when i saw the novel genre i just picked it. 😅 how can i change it to the FF section? I've tried searching how to do it but unfortunately i haven't found a proper solution yet. Also thank you so much for the time and review. 😁
4yr
2
Lain_Walker
Lain_WalkerAuthor

I'll try to check if i'll be able to change it in my desktop later. Thank you so much 😁

amaturewriter:I only know how to do it in computer..and its just there..like the tab next to novels.............?
4yr
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Lain_Walker
Lain_WalkerAuthor

😁

amaturewriter:just continue,,,,,,,,,,,,,GL BRU
4yr
Jake_Kidd
Jake_KiddLv14

We love this book don't we

amaturewriter:just continue,,,,,,,,,,,,,GL BRU
4yr
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