Item: Invincible System start from One Piece
Rating: 1
Author: Riki_Abdurahim

Riki_AbdurahimLv55yr

2020-01-10 11:36

Wow.. so many brain dead reader that give this s.hitty cliche wish fullfilment novel a 5 stars. I really want to know how their brain works. Maybe y'all just a nerd and weeb that just want a horny virgin ***** and OP retarded MC that goes around and f.uck everything up. Also. STOP WITH 'HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH' IN EVERY SINGLE CONVERSATION YOU JACK ASS

Invincible System start from One Piece

adamsmith99

4.1

129 Chs

Liked by 21 people

Replies5

Daoist856529Lv4

Pues vete ala verga entonces si no quieres leer esto

5yr

JasonenrickLv14

I ask myself the same question I always do with comments like yours ??....Why are you reading this If you don't like it ! There are #'s that explain what this is about ! Also, Webnovel is known for these types of Stories . If you want a well written (Not OP story) then go to Fanfiction.net. The only thing I agree with u is that these senseless comments are completly unecessary!

4yr

right_nutof_madaraLv1

no you just like geting cucked like the athur

3yr

OriosGrafeasLv2

There is no reason to get mad at someone for expressing their opinion. It shouldn't bother you what others think about something and the person has a right to express themselves. I myself have not read this fic and I'm likely terribly late to this party but I will say that I won't be surprised if the story is exactly as they say, as crude or childish as they may have voiced it.

Jasonenrick:I ask myself the same question I always do with comments like yours ??....Why are you reading this If you don't like it ! There are #'s that explain what this is about ! Also, Webnovel is known for these types of Stories . If you want a well written (Not OP story) then go to Fanfiction.net. The only thing I agree with u is that these senseless comments are completly unecessary!

2yr

GodOfLightLv1

Bruh

Daoist856529:Pues vete ala verga entonces si no quieres leer esto

1yr

Other Reviews

QuidanstealsnovelsLv10

Well i gave it a go and its exactly like I figured. Pointless fantsy self insert, stupid unbalanced system that completely upsets and power balance in the world in a few chapters. Generic 'harem' setting that has little to no actually development of a relationship and is just 'he's so strong, rich, cool etc... lets just fall for him instantly'. No character depth, no character development. The grammar is horrible, there is so many mistakes everywhere I had to reread entire sentences multiple times because they barely make sense. Oh and its one of those multiple worlds type ones so don't expect any good story, meaningful side characters etc... because the MC will just go into another world to destroy that eventually. There has never been a multiple world hopper fanfic that is any good. Ever. So yeah if you're one of the few rare readers who hope to find a nice quality fanfic here and do actually enjoy anime/ manga adaptions if they're done well. This isn't for you. Low quality. Of couse this won't stop the huge amount of fake reviews, the idiots who get excited over harem etc... In fact I wonder if the author will delete this review out of spite, they usually do. Someone copy and paste and save it.

5yr

XumitLv13

45 chapters in the first day. I've got nothing but praise for the author 🙌🙏 The story is good as well! MC is OP from early but I still like him. I'll give this story straight 5 stars. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

5yr

GekyumeLv11

Reveal spoiler

5yr

DessertHawkLv5

Wow dude first update with 45chapters within the first day of your stories release gonna start reading now🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

5yr

BigBoxLv3

It was a very good story.... till MC became Nami's b*tch qqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqq

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PripririLv5

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5yr

Venom_GodLv12

Mx is nami *****. Fucking pussy Mc just like the fucking author. Fuck this ****. You don’t even deserve 1 star. How the **** is Mc becoming nami Bitcoin is supposed to be other way around.

5yr

AzocthLv4

45 chaps first hour and good op harem **** ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

5yr

KnightShade420Lv13

I love it. There is nothing to complain. Grammar is good, spelling is good, sentence structure is good, storyline is great. A perfect story. Keep up the good work.

5yr

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