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GekyumeLv115yr
2020-01-07 13:46

So far the actual story is kinda good with the system and anime powers. Only part that’s bad it the inconsist mc. B itch mcs not entertaining. He makes the mc seem smart in the beginning but starts randomly acting like a b itch in front of Nami, if it’s cause he’s new to it and he slowly shows development in acting like a normal guy it would make sense but he doesnt. none of the wives are his he’s just a b itch that gives them stuff while nami fucks all his girls and makes him hear while he on the other side of a door. You could probably rewrite the cuck mc parts mad easy it’s only like 1 or 2 paragraphs other wise it’s too hard to read.

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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

Eeeh? Is it feels like there is a plan? To develop some balls of mc? Or he is just cuck without chance? If so, what a shame.....

NameIsLife
NameIsLifeLv4

Actualy, it's "OP Sidekick/Wingman POV" and this whole thing is Yuri/Bi HaremQueen Fanfic with Nami as MC.

SD_Liv
SD_LivLv4

oh well, that I threw this one at the moment when he added Kobe to the team

Alex_Preszler
Alex_PreszlerLv13

When is he going to make a new chaPeter

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