Item: Full Dive: Eternal Phantasy
Rating: 3.2
Author: Selene_Himmelsk

Selene_HimmelskLv44yr

2020-06-27 06:54

Starts great, however as time goes bye, it’s becomes a sinking boat. 😂😅😁😄🤯🤯😱😃💺🤫👺😛🛫😐😑😛🛬🙃🤮😑☺️🤢🤢😃🙊🙊🤢👺🛩🙊🛸🛫🙊🙊😃💺🛩🤫👺🙂💺🙊😐🤢🤫🤫

Full Dive: Eternal Phantasy

invayne

4.5

316 Chs

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invayneAuthor

Okay, I am shameless I know! But I wanted to let everyone know my own thoughts on this novel. This is my first time writing this genre so hopefully, I do it right! So any input my readers can give me is always appreciated. Anyway the story for Full Dive: Eternal Phantasy will be an entertaining ride. I hope you all enjoy Misaki's adventures through Eternal Phantasy. Give it a read and let me know your thoughts by leaving a comment or a review. Thanks for reading!

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Plame201Lv15

Ich muss ehrlich sagen das ich den Hut ziehen vor den drei Geschichten die in eine Geschichte führt. Ah Chun: Aufstieg in den Himmel, Full Dive: Ewige Phantasie und Phantasia: Der Prinzessin Knight sind als Einzel Geschichten schon sau gut doch wenn man den waren Welt Hintergrund sieht man was für eine Arbeit dahinter steckt. Ich hoffe auf weitere Kapital um zu sehen wie es weiter geht. Danke an den Autor für die Geschichten.

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LeonRawrLv2

Hi just passing by........... it's my first time seeing a female protagonist vrmmorpg novel so imma give 5 and read later... If anyone knows whether there are still more female prot vrommrpg out there please tell me

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RazorbackdragonLv4

Take your time and do it right and you will rival anything in the genre. Great start will be looking forward to more. Characters all feel very different despite the current lack of personal growth and small cast so far. The plot is developing slightly in a light hearted manner . Will be looking forwards to see some internal and external conflict. The villians of the story have yet to be revealed looking forward to them and the world building you will do in the future. Keep up the good work!

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Love the story development, the novel is very interesting showing us a lot about the mc and are environment and also brings people up to speed about how things came about . It's has a lot of potential and hope the author can keep up the good work and not spoil or stop this wonderful nov..😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😀😀😀😀😀

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BussyboiLv14

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Nixolas_ZinnLv3

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