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Xylene_Ch1hata
Xylene_Ch1hataLv34yr
2020-01-26 14:35

Itssssss niceeeeeee, Naiiisuuuu.... I just wish our world get a VR(or another) game like this... it would be groundbreaking... Ah. I just remembered i was a Novice NEET...

Full Dive: Eternal Phantasy

invayne
4.5
316 Chs

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invayne
invayneAuthor

Okay, I am shameless I know! But I wanted to let everyone know my own thoughts on this novel. This is my first time writing this genre so hopefully, I do it right! So any input my readers can give me is always appreciated. Anyway the story for Full Dive: Eternal Phantasy will be an entertaining ride. I hope you all enjoy Misaki's adventures through Eternal Phantasy. Give it a read and let me know your thoughts by leaving a comment or a review. Thanks for reading!

4yr

Plame201
Plame201Lv15

Ich muss ehrlich sagen das ich den Hut ziehen vor den drei Geschichten die in eine Geschichte führt. Ah Chun: Aufstieg in den Himmel, Full Dive: Ewige Phantasie und Phantasia: Der Prinzessin Knight sind als Einzel Geschichten schon sau gut doch wenn man den waren Welt Hintergrund sieht man was für eine Arbeit dahinter steckt. Ich hoffe auf weitere Kapital um zu sehen wie es weiter geht. Danke an den Autor für die Geschichten.

4yr
Alshiera_Imara_18
Alshiera_Imara_18Lv4

Reveal spoiler

3yr
LeonRawr
LeonRawrLv2

Hi just passing by........... it's my first time seeing a female protagonist vrmmorpg novel so imma give 5 and read later... If anyone knows whether there are still more female prot vrommrpg out there please tell me

4yr
Razorbackdragon
RazorbackdragonLv4

Take your time and do it right and you will rival anything in the genre. Great start will be looking forward to more. Characters all feel very different despite the current lack of personal growth and small cast so far. The plot is developing slightly in a light hearted manner . Will be looking forwards to see some internal and external conflict. The villians of the story have yet to be revealed looking forward to them and the world building you will do in the future. Keep up the good work!

4yr
wodue
wodueLv3

Love the story development, the novel is very interesting showing us a lot about the mc and are environment and also brings people up to speed about how things came about . It's has a lot of potential and hope the author can keep up the good work and not spoil or stop this wonderful nov..😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😀😀😀😀😀

4yr
Bussyboi
BussyboiLv14

It was good for the first 100 chapters in, but afterward it just felt too rushed and out of hand. You had an amazing story going on untill you started spewing actual garabge that completly threw world building, romance, and any good character development into the ground. The story started moving too quick, too soon.

4yr
Nixolas_Zinn
Nixolas_ZinnLv3

Minimal typos, fairly decent read, but it ain't for me due to disagreeance with certain aspects of the story later on. 82 chapters in and there ain't much world building, like it was faintly grazed and never to be seen again till a red moon. Character Development was kinda meh in my books, Story Development seems fairly rushed, especially as the amount you can read in an hour is like 20 some chapters. This story ain't for Lore lovers, I'm saddened to say, as it just seems like.... (I'm going to screw up this quote) "going into an apple store, where the only descriptor is the name apple, and no one tells you the price or anything, so you get arrested as you leave the store becausr of theft", it quite literally felt like that for lore. I know it's a modern-esque, but you don't explain ****, like "oh yeah these guys made it".... Or "it runs off of bull****, lets agree to never talk about it again for over 50 chapters" ..... Haaaa my grievances aside, I can look past all that, but I just can't agree with one little thing. And sadly it's a spoiler so I can't say it.... Haaaa fml

4yr
King_Frost
King_FrostLv12

This is clearly a Romance with Virtual Reality(VR) elements and not VR with some romance. It is 2 different things and I was not ready for it but it is not too bad if you can overlook a frustrating and annoying character and a poor and unbalanced VR world. There are some good characters but there is one that just kill the story for me and stops me from continuing. Too annoying and her existence is a nuisance and bring only some negative. Sigh.. I am just at chapter 42 though so the Author might have chance something, I do not know. I love the MC though. Great job on the relationship too with her BF. The author doesn't know much about gaming as it is clearly basic system and with some seriously poor decision-making skills and attributes wise. It is a clearly unbalanced game with many plotholes in it. Not much new in the VR genre which leads me to my next point; A bit boring. Its slow. Slice of life but It is too lacking so It is just boring. Or the pacing is off like in one day she becomes good enough in 4 different martial arts to be able to create her own techniques.So yeah, slowly paced and not any protagonist in view so we don't really know where we go. Thumbs up for the good writting though. It flows well and there is not much mistakes but English is my second language. All in all, it does not merit its high score but it is not too bad if you can overlook some super annoying character and an unbalanced gaming world which unfortunately, I couldn't.

4yr
Rynanna_Vixen
Rynanna_VixenLv13

Reveal spoiler

3yr
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