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JackbladesFF7
JackbladesFF7Lv34yr
2020-05-18 08:12

It is just not that good honestly. I don’t know what else to say. There are so many errors and the story isn’t written that well. You might like this if it is one of your first fan fics

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CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

I’m kinda sad/disappointed you made a rwby fanfic as there are to many between all the fanfic sites it’s not something to laugh at I wish you picked something less done like magi Ben ten percyjackson Danny phantom or street fighter mixed with teken or a Tokyo raven fanfic heck it would be acceptable to do Harry Potter Or something semi used but spiced up Like an example Ichigo sent to fate stay night and replaces shiro like have his hallow transformation masters and get give him hell mode Heck id cry if you spiced up yu yu hokisho my merging it with Hunter X hunter and adding some wifus as there are few good ones in both All these could be a awsome fanfic and have decent romance/harem of 5 girls ect It would have put up just enough of a challenge for you to grow as a author yet not be to hard of a world base

spectra_phantom
spectra_phantomLv3

If you're interested in the bakugan, someone wrote a fanfic about the bakugan and it made me feel very nostalgic. The fanfic is called "bakugan: rise of the half bakugan", if you have time, I would appreciate it if you could take a look and write your personal opinions in the comments. they are called authors, but their articles do not stand out because there is not much interaction. I'm a writer too, so I'm posting some fanfictions with comments so you can feel better. I am writing this message because I am afraid that if he feels that what he has written is not taken into account, he will leave. If you enjoy this fanfic like me, you will make me very happy if you direct others to this fanfic. Thanks if you've read this far. (and my english is not very good so sorry for the typos.)

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