I really like this it’s better than a lot of them out there and also those earlier reviews when someone says that English isn’t their first language it means their still learning ***holes
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LIKESorry friend, I will borrow your review to explain the novel a little, since as I said before I do not want to do a review of my own novel. 1- On the label of this novel you will find that it says "one piece" and "Fairy Tail". The MC of course is in Fairy Tail but with the powers of [Gura Gura not mi], the power of One Piece and Shirohige. 2- The MC of this novel is not going to follow the canon, to put it another way, he is not going to do something like this. -MC reincarnates, grows, becomes strong, enters Fairy Tail, befriends everyone, his love interest is Erza or Mirajane, creates a harem, begins the canon. - The MC is not a person who thinks with his penis in each chapter and looks for a way to get the next girl. - The MC is on his own path venturing everywhere, well although so far there is not much since there are only 57 chapters. - The MC kills without mercy, is cruel and ruthless, so do not wait for a character who is forgiving all his enemies and then shake hands as good friends, and may even later kill some character in the series. I got bored of reading the same novels all the time and that's why I started writing mine. Some novels were becoming very repetitive, following the canon, without any changes, well they made small changes but nothing more. If I'm going to read that, I'd better read the manga or watch the series. If you are looking for a MC that does not follow the same pattern as always, then this novel is for you. 3- Finally, if you are going to read this, expect a bad grammar since this is the first novel, as I have said repeatedly, I can say, I am still a novice writer who was improving thanks to the advice of readers. Some say, because you write novels if you write them wrong, but how are you going to improve in writing if you don't write. I will correct the grammar little by little, when I have time. Oh and lastly, this is a slow story.
Does it have romance?
Sunkenrock:Sorry friend, I will borrow your review to explain the novel a little, since as I said before I do not want to do a review of my own novel. 1- On the label of this novel you will find that it says "one piece" and "Fairy Tail". The MC of course is in Fairy Tail but with the powers of [Gura Gura not mi], the power of One Piece and Shirohige. 2- The MC of this novel is not going to follow the canon, to put it another way, he is not going to do something like this. -MC reincarnates, grows, becomes strong, enters Fairy Tail, befriends everyone, his love interest is Erza or Mirajane, creates a harem, begins the canon. - The MC is not a person who thinks with his penis in each chapter and looks for a way to get the next girl. - The MC is on his own path venturing everywhere, well although so far there is not much since there are only 57 chapters. - The MC kills without mercy, is cruel and ruthless, so do not wait for a character who is forgiving all his enemies and then shake hands as good friends, and may even later kill some character in the series. I got bored of reading the same novels all the time and that's why I started writing mine. Some novels were becoming very repetitive, following the canon, without any changes, well they made small changes but nothing more. If I'm going to read that, I'd better read the manga or watch the series. If you are looking for a MC that does not follow the same pattern as always, then this novel is for you. 3- Finally, if you are going to read this, expect a bad grammar since this is the first novel, as I have said repeatedly, I can say, I am still a novice writer who was improving thanks to the advice of readers. Some say, because you write novels if you write them wrong, but how are you going to improve in writing if you don't write. I will correct the grammar little by little, when I have time. Oh and lastly, this is a slow story.
Well said and great story so far
Sunkenrock:Sorry friend, I will borrow your review to explain the novel a little, since as I said before I do not want to do a review of my own novel. 1- On the label of this novel you will find that it says "one piece" and "Fairy Tail". The MC of course is in Fairy Tail but with the powers of [Gura Gura not mi], the power of One Piece and Shirohige. 2- The MC of this novel is not going to follow the canon, to put it another way, he is not going to do something like this. -MC reincarnates, grows, becomes strong, enters Fairy Tail, befriends everyone, his love interest is Erza or Mirajane, creates a harem, begins the canon. - The MC is not a person who thinks with his penis in each chapter and looks for a way to get the next girl. - The MC is on his own path venturing everywhere, well although so far there is not much since there are only 57 chapters. - The MC kills without mercy, is cruel and ruthless, so do not wait for a character who is forgiving all his enemies and then shake hands as good friends, and may even later kill some character in the series. I got bored of reading the same novels all the time and that's why I started writing mine. Some novels were becoming very repetitive, following the canon, without any changes, well they made small changes but nothing more. If I'm going to read that, I'd better read the manga or watch the series. If you are looking for a MC that does not follow the same pattern as always, then this novel is for you. 3- Finally, if you are going to read this, expect a bad grammar since this is the first novel, as I have said repeatedly, I can say, I am still a novice writer who was improving thanks to the advice of readers. Some say, because you write novels if you write them wrong, but how are you going to improve in writing if you don't write. I will correct the grammar little by little, when I have time. Oh and lastly, this is a slow story.
If you're interested in the bakugan, someone wrote a fanfic about the bakugan and it made me feel very nostalgic. The fanfic is called "bakugan: rise of the half bakugan", if you have time, I would appreciate it if you could take a look and write your personal opinions in the comments. they are called authors, but their articles do not stand out because there is not much interaction. I'm a writer too, so I'm posting some fanfictions with comments so you can feel better. I am writing this message because I am afraid that if he feels that what he has written is not taken into account, he will leave. If you enjoy this fanfic like me, you will make me very happy if you direct others to this fanfic. Thanks if you've read this far. (and my english is not very good so sorry for the typos.)