I really like this it’s better than a lot of them out there and also those earlier reviews when someone says that English isn’t their first language it means their still learning ***holes

To keep it simple, good idea, bad grammar. I recommend this to new people in the fanfic world, because if you have read many good fanfics you may not read this because of the grammatical errors and that would be a shame of a possible good history.

you know....look English might not be your main language but at least learn how to spell basic **** like she/he/they/her as the story is barely legible. If you cant even do this stop writing cause its essentially pointless. The readers can barely understand what you are writing and it wot matter even if you have a good story

I tried reading this... I really did... But I just can't do it anymore... The grammar is horrendous even for someone like me whose main language isn't English. Every chapter needs you to decipher their meaning 😑😨

Its a cool idea and the beginning was cool. However, once the MC is able to slaughter 15 mages/warriors at ten years old with only HAKI I couldn't handle it much longer. Then comes the drop in grammar and the confusing POV switches of first and third person. By chapter 17 the MC hasn't even touched this worlds main power system and only utilizes One Piece crap powers to a great mastery. Mixing two worlds power systems never works out well as the author has already beefed up amd weakened the MC to fit the situation he finds himself in. I guess the only good thing in this fic is how well the MC personality stands out and remains consistent. Sadly the same can't be said about the 100 generic chinese villains he encounters on a regular basis. If you can handle poor grammar and genericness then you'll like this fic.

This novel was something I would love to read.... IF ALMOST EVERY OTHER SENTENCE DIDN'T SUDDENLY CUT OFF! I would rate it better, even if the novel had terrible grammar, but sentences that aren't even complete are something else completely. There are certain things I can tolerate, but this isn't one.

It is just not that good honestly. I don’t know what else to say. There are so many errors and the story isn’t written that well. You might like this if it is one of your first fan fics

The MC has a jackass personally that I hate, and the author know it too but he doesn't change it. I mean how care if the MC dead in a old age. The saying goes the older you are the wiser you get. But no the MC doesn't care about any one, but him self. I mean he left his new sister alone to be a slave, while he off to kill people. I never reading this again. I am surprised that people like it. I mean he is not a human being inside, and in the first chapter he said we are all human being. 1STAR PEOPLE 1 STAR OR 0 STAR. BULL* IS WHAT I CALL THIS NOVEL.

The whole book is in broken AF English, nearly impossible to read. 🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁