Primordious_Law
I like the more clever stories than the more bombastic ones.Though if the story is both clever and bombastic? That's just bliss.
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I wrote another 3000 word review but deleted it, since this novel didn't deserve that hate. No, it deserves "HATRED". I wish the author never learned English so as not to have water my time. Bloody hell, you had a potential goldmine on your hand because of your unique world and its power system but an atrocious abomination you have created. There is nothing good here since like the author who I suspect ate his sibling in the womb, the bad, worse and the worst part of the story have completely cannibalized the miniscule particle sized good that this novel had. Heck, at this point reading 10 Dozen absolutely generic cultivator novels about a mc with cheats would be better than cursing your eyes and torturing your brain by seeing and reading this piece of garbage. It's been 2 or 3 weeks since the story started. And chapter 1 to chapter 1000 encapsulated all this. I don't mind if authors do this but honestly you need to know your damn worth and talent. You cannot milk 3 weeks for 1000 goddamn chapters. You have no talent or patience for it. Anyways, don't read beyond 50 or 100. It's enough to get a taste of what the card system (the power system is and can do. That's all.
- Primordious_Law10mthReplied to Super_caveman
Only a little. But I remember chuckling to myself thinking Sara probably never took him seriously or became frustrated with his dilly dallying that she was already in a relationship or maybe even secretly married. It would have been nice if before he died he knew this particular heart wrecking information. Probably would have led to a lot of character development or maybe character distortion from the very beginning of the story.😂
Seconds later, his vision started to get blurry and his hearing started fading in and out. He faintly sees the figure of someone moving near him but he couldn't make out who it is. - Primordious_Law1yrCommented
You need an editor.
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suicide doors?
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Is bro a measurement tape?
He's somewhere 165 centimeters tall! - Primordious_Law1yrCommented
He was*
He is expecting to wake up in a brightly-lit hospital room. Instead, he woke up in a cold dark alley with a body he didn't recognize. - Primordious_Law1yrCommented
Probably Sara. What a miss. If she had tranmigrated with you she would have no choice but to marry you lol.
Seconds later, his vision started to get blurry and his hearing started fading in and out. He faintly sees the figure of someone moving near him but he couldn't make out who it is. - Primordious_Law1yrCommented
your hands are already mush bro.
"No…" Poul weakly uttered as he struggled to move away. He tried to lift himself up but failed to do so. He tried to reach him with his hand but his hand won't obey his orders. - Primordious_Law1yrCommented
Truck kun is bout to save this man's feelings that would otherwise be hurt when she inevitably rejects him. W Truck kun.
An ear-deafening popping sound erupted outside, causing the two to instinctively look out the window and saw a truck heading towards them at blinding speed. - Primordious_Law1yrCommented
She already has someone else probably. So yay for transmigration
"The best surgeon in Denmark," Poul smirked as if bragging about his future wife like a proud husband. - Primordious_Law1yrCommented
This ain't it chief
"You know I'm head over heels for her right? So much so that I proposed that I'll marry her once we grew up to which she agreed. Well, I'm going to do just that and I invited her to join us here." - Primordious_Law1yrReplied to MayonnaiseHunter
I only need 20 to become half a millionaire after 2 years and I will be happy
Both of them graduated at the same time and pursued master's degrees in their respective field. After that, Poul left the country to pursue another master's degree at Stanford University in electrical engineering. Poul completed it with flying colors and started working at Lockheed Martin. But after four years, he hopped into AG Siemens and worked there for three years, and then hopped again in BMW and stayed for two years before returning to Denmark to work at Alstom as the current chief design engineer for future train projects. - Primordious_Law1yrCommented
more like full of opportunities for the mc.
This World Is Full of Danger - Primordious_Law1yrCommented
here comes the cheese
[Talent: Demon Lair (SSS-Rank, only one), Territory Devour (Able to grow, current A-Rank)] - Primordious_Law1yrCommented"It would be good enough to be able to obtain C-Rank."
- Primordious_Law2yrCommented
Winnie you fool ... you had one small job!!
(To Winnie: Please check this paragraph above and change it when you go through the chapters. I have no idea who is Rod and Li Jie.)