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IPreferLonerMcLv54yr
2020-04-02 00:00

Elric is a simp. Elric will kill and die for females because of some pride. Elric also makes retarded decisions like trying to reason with a demon that’s there to kill them. Nothing else needs to be said. Read the first few chapters for yourself and find out.

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iamnaz7Author

He is a simp indeed my friend hehe

Tee_heeLv4

'Elric will kill and die for females' ah this **** again

Crimson_AssassinLv12

That’s sad, I was gonna read this but seeing you agree with this review I’mma just not waste my time

iamnaz7:He is a simp indeed my friend hehe
iamnaz7Author

It is a part of his character development bro. He won't be like that for too long. This story is about progression and realization that being a simp will cost you a lot in the future. Here, the MC will learn to stand and be decisive and push thru no matter what

Crimson_Assassin:That’s sad, I was gonna read this but seeing you agree with this review I’mma just not waste my time
Lcator1Lv6

A heads up to you bro, from my experiences with countless amounts of novels, as well as masterpieces from various ranges, such as comedy - Lohp, all around masterpiece - reverend insanity and cliche and comprehension aaaand swordsmanship masterpiece - legend of swordsman, neeever include female characters whom the mc falls for due to beauty (unless it's one person who he falls in love with wholeheartedly through steady progression and not just love at first sight). Also don't make the mc act differently towards females due to the simple fact he is young or thirsty 😓😅, for myself it is the biggest turn off for any novel. I would wish for it to be displayed as, 'xyz male has messed around with me many times severely and now attempted to kill me' - the natural course of action for a smart mc would be to kill him unless his background is monstrous, In a similar situation with a female being the antagonist she should be dealt with the same as the male

iamnaz7:It is a part of his character development bro. He won't be like that for too long. This story is about progression and realization that being a simp will cost you a lot in the future. Here, the MC will learn to stand and be decisive and push thru no matter what
CocoaButterLv11

Thanks for the warning. You saved me effort and time to read about a simp's journey.

DjabilongLv6

Notto disu ****to agen...

Khavos_RuddLv6

Was gonna avoid as well, but your comment drew me back True, that was shameful of me - making a decision based on others rather than trying to see it for myself - but that is also the true value of learninng from experience gained from others. There are too many cases of disappointing stories on this website that we do indeed have to take some of these reviews into consideration.

iamnaz7:It is a part of his character development bro. He won't be like that for too long. This story is about progression and realization that being a simp will cost you a lot in the future. Here, the MC will learn to stand and be decisive and push thru no matter what
MADDYLv3

so, how is it?

Khavos_Rudd:Was gonna avoid as well, but your comment drew me back True, that was shameful of me - making a decision based on others rather than trying to see it for myself - but that is also the true value of learninng from experience gained from others. There are too many cases of disappointing stories on this website that we do indeed have to take some of these reviews into consideration.
Khavos_RuddLv6

Wound up dropping it anyway. The plot was forced and cliched. True, many stories around the world are similar, but there are two things working for them that this one was missing. First, the plotting being organic rather than forced. There is a sense of inevitability that matches many a Greek tragedy such that even if the ending is inevitable, you still want to go through the process just to know. Here; it was like having a hammer smashed into your hand just to drive the nail. The worst part was the cliches. You can have repeated plots but then you'd have to include new ways of telling it. The trash trope can be used once more but the trash must be something different from other trash you've encountered, get me?

MADDY:so, how is it?
MADDYLv3

ohh, ill skip this one then, thanks for the review saved my time :)

Khavos_Rudd:Wound up dropping it anyway. The plot was forced and cliched. True, many stories around the world are similar, but there are two things working for them that this one was missing. First, the plotting being organic rather than forced. There is a sense of inevitability that matches many a Greek tragedy such that even if the ending is inevitable, you still want to go through the process just to know. Here; it was like having a hammer smashed into your hand just to drive the nail. The worst part was the cliches. You can have repeated plots but then you'd have to include new ways of telling it. The trash trope can be used once more but the trash must be something different from other trash you've encountered, get me?
Bjorn_StormwaveLv2

Yep, even simp for 1 nano second ruins a story. Sucks to suck, author.

iamnaz7:It is a part of his character development bro. He won't be like that for too long. This story is about progression and realization that being a simp will cost you a lot in the future. Here, the MC will learn to stand and be decisive and push thru no matter what
Filler1_Name2Lv15

having a simp character does not a sucky author make. Some people can enjoy novels with simps and though that's not me, I still know that some people enjoy it and any story that someone out there can enjoy is a good story even if I personally don't like it.

Bjorn_Stormwave:Yep, even simp for 1 nano second ruins a story. Sucks to suck, author.
Abhinav_Reddy_6592Lv1

GOOD GOD THANKS FOR THE WARNING

Jessy_S2Lv3

I was going to give it a chance, but after your review I don't even want to anymore, I know it's impossible to find something that isn't cliché, because all movies, series, cartoons, soap operas, etc. have things that already It happened in others and it's impossible to escape it... but the important thing is the execution of the cliché, if it is well organized, you can have a good story, but it seems that it is not the case, so after so much decline Disappointment I had on this site I prefer to believe the reviews of those who have read it..

Khavos_Rudd:Wound up dropping it anyway. The plot was forced and cliched. True, many stories around the world are similar, but there are two things working for them that this one was missing. First, the plotting being organic rather than forced. There is a sense of inevitability that matches many a Greek tragedy such that even if the ending is inevitable, you still want to go through the process just to know. Here; it was like having a hammer smashed into your hand just to drive the nail. The worst part was the cliches. You can have repeated plots but then you'd have to include new ways of telling it. The trash trope can be used once more but the trash must be something different from other trash you've encountered, get me?
Genn_starsLv3

you kind of had a reason for it. Author-san literally confirmed what you hate the most about a character.

Khavos_Rudd:Was gonna avoid as well, but your comment drew me back True, that was shameful of me - making a decision based on others rather than trying to see it for myself - but that is also the true value of learninng from experience gained from others. There are too many cases of disappointing stories on this website that we do indeed have to take some of these reviews into consideration.
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