Ero_Sage

Was his thing flat? I don't know how that would work otherwise.

Alright, as long as you show proper mental development. (Maybe he will develop trauma or he will resent and hate her to the bones?) Actions must have consequences or the writing will be hard to digest.

How?

Is she even safe? His brothers have eyes on her.

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Disappointing.

I thought so...

Still, characters becoming mind controlled slaves takes the fun away. Sigh.

Dude, I didn't target my words at you specifically. My comment was as general as yours. Then you go on directing my generalised words specifically at me. Did you subconsciously accept you are intolerant and spoiled? Don't do that. (And I commented like that because there are many authors here from an extremely poor background trying to earn a living. This author told me he earns $200 a month full time and it is enough to support his family. Not everyone is intelligent like Brandon Sanderson, only few are.)

I feel pity the most among other emotions.😂