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ApocalypseX
ApocalypseXAuthor5yr
2019-10-04 00:06

Hey guys! ApocX here! If you didn't start reading this novel, I suggest you start right now. It is definitely something you will enjoy, especially for those VRMMO and Romance novel fans! ;) Don't mind the shameless 5 Star Rating. Update Schedule - Daily. I still have my main novel Stronghold In The Apocalypse to write so I can't write more. Enjoy reading! :) P.S If you leave a bad review for the story, then make sure it's something that would help in the improvement of the story, because I sure as hell would delete it.

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vargasb
vargasbLv14

You should go get yourself an editor because your grammar really sucks

Endlez
EndlezLv4

"If you didn't start reading this novel, I suggest you start right now." - I'm sure I will be regretting this choice by tomorrow. Binge reading a good novel before it reaches 200 chapters is torture... They say people learn from their mistakes... apparently I'm not one of them.

Christian_Popoca
Christian_PopocaLv12

I know it’s shameless but I want more chapters lol thanks for what you have written

newthings
newthingsLv6

forgot tag op mc XD

Demonio_Kuro
Demonio_KuroLv2

please don't try to prolong the relationship of mc!! I thought it suppose for them to work together since it second life!!

anexdot
anexdotLv5

i did regret it

Endlez:"If you didn't start reading this novel, I suggest you start right now." - I'm sure I will be regretting this choice by tomorrow. Binge reading a good novel before it reaches 200 chapters is torture... They say people learn from their mistakes... apparently I'm not one of them.
SteamBunDelivery
SteamBunDeliveryLv12

Grammar svcksss bigtime

Deeran
DeeranLv5

u must be my soul twin 😬😬

Endlez:"If you didn't start reading this novel, I suggest you start right now." - I'm sure I will be regretting this choice by tomorrow. Binge reading a good novel before it reaches 200 chapters is torture... They say people learn from their mistakes... apparently I'm not one of them.
Lady_Penelope
Lady_PenelopeLv2

Ty author for bringing joy to us by writing the story..

VRMMO_magnutt
VRMMO_magnuttLv4

Let me be real with you bruv.... i hate the existence of grammar nazis in society I utterly loath them to the very fiber of my being... And you just made me hate myself so much. Thanks a lot for that

SEISHOKU_SHA108
SEISHOKU_SHA108Lv6

The best VRMMO novel that i read 👍👍👍

HadesChampion
HadesChampionLv4

Hmm I'm dropping at pay wall, looked at titles up to 250+ and fast passed a few and saw he still didn't get the girl , this is why fanfics are best

zenzaburo
zenzaburoLv12

Binging ugh

Saurx
SaurxLv4

Even though it's self promotion, it's a good story

read3r_9030
read3r_9030Lv14

don't listing to other people, this book is Great the best aspect is the worlds best assassin turned back time and got reborn before he made mistakes, and now he's using his assassins skills to play a game really love it so please continue writing, this is the best Turing back time and jump into a video game book out there release more chapters please

BoneCrusherSLAY
BoneCrusherSLAYLv15

SMH. pretty much same thing as Guild Wars......

EroticEarwig
EroticEarwigLv13

I really enjoyed your stronghold in the apocalypse novel, but this one was just so terrible I couldnt even hit double digits for chapters. The english was broken, many things happened that were just plain impossible, and the rules of the game he plays make little sense.

EroticEarwig
EroticEarwigLv13

I mean, thats straight up the most common plotline of every vrmmo reincarnation novel out there...

read3r_9030:don't listing to other people, this book is Great the best aspect is the worlds best assassin turned back time and got reborn before he made mistakes, and now he's using his assassins skills to play a game really love it so please continue writing, this is the best Turing back time and jump into a video game book out there release more chapters please
Emsinity
EmsinityLv14

Yow. .. Did you dropped this already?

P_Young_4470
P_Young_4470Lv13

after reading guild wars and then hearing that this is a worse copy of that I'm not even trying it done regretted getting involved with guild wars. guild wars + reading = REGRET =(

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TFH
TFHLv6
BravoEchoVictor
BravoEchoVictorLv4
Ibuprofen
IbuprofenLv12

Needs a tonne of work, props to the author and I wish him/her the best of luck. I must say, the first chapter was imho, freaking terrible. It was all over the place, nonsensical mish mash of all the best stuff someone could think of for a modern day mc slapped together into an abomination called Michael. I seriously could not bring myself to read another chapter, I dont say this to discourage the author, it's hard to write! I understand that it isn't easy. This book needs some serious editing and the author needs to just sit and relax a bit, your mc never has to be the everything guy! The best things about characters in novels arent their perfections but their imperfections! All their flaws make them come alive and make your readers empathise with them through their journey! The best thing you can do for your audience is to make them always think about the qualities of our creations that resonate with them! Connecting with them makes your story stand out from the rest of the monotonous garbage that litters this app. You should (If you haven't already but suggesting by the hazardous writing that feels like its come straight from your head to being published) brain storm ideas, the direction you want to go, important antagonists and/or ideas for ones to come! Major turning points in your story that will affect your mc in major ways! These sort of plot points are needed so you can have some sort of direction to love in otherwise it becomes a mess, something that becomes harder to fix the longer you go. Never start the fillings before you've conquered your outline and outlook of where you want your story to go! You may not read this but I seriously hope this helps if you do kind regards

GodharemZ
GodharemZLv13
Hayato_Shinohara
Hayato_ShinoharaLv10

So I know the author is extremely sensitive in hearing negative reviews, but I have to be honest. As much as the premise does to serve the fans with things they (including myself) would like (such as VRMMO concepts, Romance, Strong powers etc.) It has a very important issue of execution. From the first chapter, I can quote what others have been saying which boils down to it "being all over the place". It tells us what is going on rather than showing, but in a very loose method. It does not keep a focus and ultimately, becomes uncomfortable to read. Each chapter should have a purpose. The *flow* and *transitioning* of each sentence and paragraph should be strong and easy to follow through. What I would advise is for the author to look at *how* other authors write their books. Yes, I say "how" becasue I feel that the writing style needs to change. It can get exhausting, especially if a lot of chapters have been completed. Let's say you learned a lot from other books and finally came up with a better style – it'd take a long time to fix all of it. I understand. However, if that's the case I would get an editor to help you out. There's plenty of authors who would do that in the discord for Webnovel/RoyalRoad. For other works, I'd analyze how Sword Art Online, Rising of the Shield Hero or Library of Heaven's Path wrote their chapters and their style of conveying their messages to their audience. Plot wise, make sure when writing a scene to imagine how the readers will feel about that scene when comparing it to the *previous chapters*. For example, if the main cast fought and won against a guild of people but then suffers against several weaker hunters later on, there should be a reason *why* they are struggling in the very least, or else it will leave them confused. Overall, great job with nearly 3 million views and good luck with the rest! 👍🏻

Vayne_0688
Vayne_0688Lv2
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