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VatOfRedundancy
VatOfRedundancyLv54yr
2020-07-15 11:33

Fantastic story great main character arc it's a must read for harry Potter fans especially if you didn't appreciate how dumb the characters are in the original

Harry Potter and the Fortunate Queen

Mystical_Snowflake
4.4
459 Chs

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manasa_kommuru
manasa_kommuruLv13

Reveal spoiler

5yr

Skepparn
SkepparnLv14

I don't know how to properly say it but the characters feels bland and a little forced for some reason, like mc feels out of place and doesn't fit, it's like she's not an mc and she's not supposed to be there, hard to explain but the way it's written with how mediocre the mc is and on top of that mc doesn't do much it just feels weird and for me it made it barely readable, got to ch15 and couldn't continue any longer without getting bored out of my mind

5yr
VuckLWolf
VuckLWolfLv4

I dont know how a copy pasta story can be this well recieved its extremely boring. To all those that have read already HP this will be same story with a diffrent MC but nothing changes it has no butterfly effect or amything. Extremely boring and repetative. Nothing is original aand ir feels like im reading summary of HP from a diffrent perspective. Everything in this story that is done well is copied from Rowling so yeah this fanfic is bad imo.

4yr
SeleneXLilith
SeleneXLilithLv15

Good writing and story development. Keep up the good work. Please don't drop the novel. MC is very well thought out and each new chapter leaves you wanting more. Constant updates which is always a plus

5yr
nintendo64
nintendo64Lv6

Bland, boring and unoriginal. If you want to reread the books but from the perspective of a background/extra student who doesnt manage to alter the original plot whatsoever then you will love reading this.

4yr
Slowbat
SlowbatLv5

In the first few minutes the line "but you didn't saw it" was uttered, such a grave offence shall not be forgiven. Would not suggest reading, unless you are an uncultured pig the horrendous errors that lay within shall physically hurt you.

5yr
Ferus1
Ferus1Lv2

I like it, its very engaging and the updates come regularly. ...............................................................................................................................

5yr
SnowRose
SnowRoseLv14

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Kroniichiwa
KroniichiwaLv5

I like everything i read about this novel, good luck to the author and i hope that this novel can keep going and dont be dropped ....................................

5yr
Dr_Absent_Minded
Dr_Absent_MindedLv14

nice take with a original female lead i like it please continue your good work its a bit refreshing from norm the lead is perfect for now, balanced pls keep it up and yes more chapters please also dont drop

5yr
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