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SlowbatLv55yr
2019-09-10 16:29

In the first few minutes the line "but you didn't saw it" was uttered, such a grave offence shall not be forgiven. Would not suggest reading, unless you are an uncultured pig the horrendous errors that lay within shall physically hurt you.

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DreamzWorkLv13

Hhmmm

Chado_SamaLv5

This made me laugh.

Ahtu_FlaggLv4

Well, you know what they say. No pain no gain. There are good story tellers with ****e grammar. I keep reading and hope they get someone to edit it later on. Happens a lot(ofc sometimes I just keep suffering until I give up on it).

Ahtu_FlaggLv4

Fair assessment though. Thanks for warning away those that won't be able to suffer through it.

Ahtu_FlaggLv4

You know what I find way worse tho? No tags... I don't want to start getting into a story, only to have it become some weird story about gender dysphoria, inconsistent characters, NTR bs, cheater sympathizing, or other twilight-esque fcked up business.

AzmuthLv4

It's nothing like that give it a try. It does have lots of drama though.

Ahtu_Flagg:You know what I find way worse tho? No tags... I don't want to start getting into a story, only to have it become some weird story about gender dysphoria, inconsistent characters, NTR bs, cheater sympathizing, or other twilight-esque fcked up business.
HumbuubLv4

what did they did?

Mystical_SnowflakeAuthor

God, the first and second volumes were grammatical disasters, weren't they? Your comment made it hilarious though 😂

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