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SkepparnLv145yr
2019-07-03 19:00

I don't know how to properly say it but the characters feels bland and a little forced for some reason, like mc feels out of place and doesn't fit, it's like she's not an mc and she's not supposed to be there, hard to explain but the way it's written with how mediocre the mc is and on top of that mc doesn't do much it just feels weird and for me it made it barely readable, got to ch15 and couldn't continue any longer without getting bored out of my mind

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TartarusLv11

Yup,it feels like the mc is only extra character that are forced into the story to make it a little difference. Just POV from an extra character

Aysel_InaraLv10

Well, yes I agree with your point. The character isn't even is shocked in second chapter and accepts everything like a trivial change, she's submissive and without any emotional expression & development. Speeches are odd at some places.

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