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Review Detail of heavenbeyond in Synthetic Survivor: Machine Age

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heavenbeyond
heavenbeyondLv153yrheavenbeyond

Overall it was pretty much just like a summary of what happened and for me that really likes world building and kingdom building/with machines similar to the novel mechanical god emperor it would have been nice if he went more into detail in the beginning if it went to a different direction with more like a dedicated volume one rebuilding earth and volume 2 wormhole to another world appears would be so much better imo but nah he wakes up and rebuilds earth in 2 chapters so no build up or momentum in the story so its very bland but i like the concept as i view it as a rts game like stellaris not sure what future chap has in store but already disappointed in lack of details and fleshing out the story.

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ArashiTenebris
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dude, you need to learn to add comma and dot there, it like you try to marathon the comment without stopping :v

heavenbeyond
heavenbeyondLv15heavenbeyond

Mb bro just ranting on a good concept that wasn’t executed in a way that i felt showed its full potential

ArashiTenebris:dude, you need to learn to add comma and dot there, it like you try to marathon the comment without stopping :v