Item: Synthetic Survivor: Machine Age
Rating: 2.2

LegsLv145yr

2019-09-13 02:45

Pretty boring, switches all over the place. No foreshadowing of introductions, too many plot lines occurring at the same time. Nothing much to add besides this.

Synthetic Survivor: Machine Age

NaranNarman

4.5

162 Chs

Liked by 4 people

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NaranNarmanAuthor

Hello there! Author here. I appreciate you for taking the time to read and review my novel, if you can, can you read a bit further? I am not quite sure if it improves later on since I myself am biased towards it but I hope you still enjoy, cheers!

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LegsLv14

Sure, I will read ahead in the future and see more.

5yr

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Hello everyone, thank you for reading my second published book! Depending on the reads and feedback, this book will be updated either regularly or irregularly, thank you so much for devoting time for this novel of mine, cheers and hapoy reading! Any and all feedback, wheter negative or positive, is appreciated.

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