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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv55yr
2019-08-16 04:40

I take back my review,it's dissapointing story.Because autor just need's to go with shounen/cultivation sh*t logic.Well you know,those kinda of logic that you will feel bad to hear.Let me give you examples. Apparently most op dragons in multiverse is elemental dragon empress,who can control all five elements.....Cool right?Though,in original story,we have top dragons with conceptual powers like dreams and infinity,and sh*tty fire and ice is better....inhale,,,,exhale...boiiii, Okay,let's brush it off for now... For readers entertaiment and building up hype for future battles,we nerf mc like twice in a day.Without joke,rine-sharingan,even if im not fan of naruto eyes,apparently -trash......Yeah. What's not thrash is cultivation and see people weak points,because you know,eyes of death perception,who can kill shinso vampire,who born from dead god's blood and flesh-is trash too.....BOIII.. Ofcourse we all understand that this is just for the sake of plot progression and entertaiment...so let's not take it close to a heart,right? In my previous reivew,Im point out nicely,that revealing jason secrets,make huge plotholes and even worse logic seems to screams for me from the grave,that autor put down her.But,oh well.... Apparently,guy born from two apex existance is trash without help of others and his cheats.....BOIIII... And now 12 years(or I don't give a F*CK) kid who descendant of king arthur,beats down our hero who train and bleed for 12 years of his life,not only in swords,OH NOOO,but in a raw power.A DRAGON,A DEMON AND HERO,GOT TRASHED AROUND BY OTHER HERO DESCENDANT FOR PLOT SAKE AND MAKING FRIENDS.......if you don't know what to writte in future and just slow down story pace to this almost filler like sh*t chapters and even more TO THIS LEVEL OF ABSURDITY,maybe just maybe,you need some insipiration for future plot,because right now,it's no more than a joke.Peace out.

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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

I see worst stuff though, just for fun, like: Kriptonian who can be killed by bullets and got trashed by bane on venom and Solomon Grandy..... Yeah, see some ****.

Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

Or guy with vector manipulation, getting beaten up in close combat, by axe.... Still can't take it from my head.

iLoveEro
iLoveEroLv10

I think that author can make like elements fusion to make some logic there

Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

Still don't see how something like divine divide could lose to all elemental stuff... Dragon who could make dreams come true is even more in question..

iLoveEro:I think that author can make like elements fusion to make some logic there
Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

But of course, if autor go with cultivation logic and from elements create chaos energy(still energy, though) and somehow, just like throwing logic in a trash bin, it will be ultimate power of all(why not all cultivator do this) and it will break all laws and logic of the world. And yeah, I'm getting feeling it's exactly would happen, there is even a troupe with getting in a new city and mc becomes weakest. A frog in a dwell,or something like this

iLoveEro:I think that author can make like elements fusion to make some logic there
Flaashii
FlaashiiLv13

thanks for the review the instant that I read this I Stopped reading this novel because really I hate nerfing so much and then there is the god enemy stuff like that -.- like really can you not do bring random people inside dxd the mc is ok the system is cliche as **** but still ok if done right but the random extra characters from outside the dxd universe -.-I did hope for a mature mc with summons from fate and his own faction of heroes :P welp

Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

Well autor want to sit on all chairs at once. And that make it so idiotic. You can't just ignore all what you wrote before for a new fight. Just to make it more interesting, and yeah, shounen troupes in writing format always looking strange.... Especially when you have numerical values in system.

Flaashii:thanks for the review the instant that I read this I Stopped reading this novel because really I hate nerfing so much and then there is the god enemy stuff like that -.- like really can you not do bring random people inside dxd the mc is ok the system is cliche as **** but still ok if done right but the random extra characters from outside the dxd universe -.-I did hope for a mature mc with summons from fate and his own faction of heroes :P welp
ANDRGENOUS
ANDRGENOUSLv4

xp

WarlordRipper
WarlordRipperLv3

bruh that nigga aint. no fucking kryptonian but some knockoff bitch no kryptonian, especially when put into earth is that fucking weak, unless that someone is like superboy, an incomplete and artificial superman

Yuri_is_Ntr:I see worst stuff though, just for fun, like: Kriptonian who can be killed by bullets and got trashed by bane on venom and Solomon Grandy..... Yeah, see some ****.
Reiya9
Reiya9Lv4

You do know kryptonian are all artificial right? Only Superman was a natural born. Although superboy was incomplete that’s true since they used human tech to clone him amd not krypton tech

WarlordRipper:bruh that nigga aint. no fucking kryptonian but some knockoff bitch no kryptonian, especially when put into earth is that fucking weak, unless that someone is like superboy, an incomplete and artificial superman
Kobus_Liebenberg_4211
Kobus_Liebenberg_4211Lv14

But that’s DC and there characters are op and have to be put down this is just sad

Yuri_is_Ntr:I see worst stuff though, just for fun, like: Kriptonian who can be killed by bullets and got trashed by bane on venom and Solomon Grandy..... Yeah, see some ****.
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ShuraTheDestroyer
ShuraTheDestroyerLv4

Well, this is my opinion The mc is extremely nerfed constantly to the point of being defeated by a human. He is supposed to have the heart / soul of Ashura, which are basically incarnations of war, master of combat, and he doesn't even know how to fight straight yet !!! And even though he's from the upper realm with insanely powerful parents, he evolves slower than the xianxia-cultivated novel characters. Dialogues have no emotion,are emotionless, they are simply text, they pass nothing. It still pisses me off that he saves Kuroka and asks Shirone to become Rias's servant, and she has even more potential than Kuroka herself. Another annoying fact is that mc should always interact with the gremory family, never another, always them, this is cliche to the max, another cliche is he always interact with one of the 3 factions, he could simply get closer to the Shinto faction or even the Hindu, the fact that he became Azazel's foster child literally "destroyed" the story for me. Not to mention that mc doesn't evolve into anything, emotionally, physically, or anything, it's still the same. History has evolved almost nothing in all of these chapters. And as hell a dragon lineage of ice and fire has more potential power than dragons that can duplicate and divide power infinitely, others that are conceptual beings like dream and infinity. Even if the novel has concepts of cultivation, its having power based on ice and fire is nowhere near these other dragons, Maybe that's why he's so weak compared to other dragons., it remains weak even though it is from a divine realm. Now about grammar I can not give much opinion, English is not my first language and I am not fluent in it. Although I find some grammatical errors I still find the story very readable. The refresh rate was also good so far, that the romance is stalled. But in short away, if you like a story Little elaborate and without compromise or plot building and character growth, read this story, otherwise not.

Kefvin
KefvinLv14
Suppa_Readah
Suppa_ReadahLv3

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