Flaashii

Woooow, did not expect his family to die, what a plot twist. Like can you guys not be so predictable What was wrong with his family still living ? And him going on his Adventure after that you could just not mention his family again, or mention them when he does something big like a reaction. This was such a letdown of an early arc you can already predict where this will go , i will read further to see if it gets better but my motivation in reading this is already almost at the bottom.

Same as your MHA fic, parents die, and that's that nothing new always the same sh1t in almost every fic I come across <.< how about not letting them die or something, I just find it lazy writing for a beginning because it is the easiest to motivate the character....

Shoes inside the house ? Bloody American

meh too much really ... even if he is playing it.

I really like this fic until now, but there are a few things I don't like, like the OC love interest. I never was a fan of OC characters being the love interest; after all, there are many characters in Fairy Tail. Why someone would choose an OC, I don't know. And then there is the AI-like writing. Sure, it's readable, but sometimes a situation just repeats itself in one chapter just for the word count. I Like the fic and I will read more, I like his powers without him being so edgy or cringe about it. Hope there will be more love interest's after all he does not age :D and yes I am in the Harem Sect those Non-Harem people can lick my **** :D

Yeah well, why not just because they are overused should not mean that you can't use them and I think the trend of not using them has become more in recent times that I can't find many fic's with them being used as harem members... In the end it's up to you but I would not want them to be with issei or any other men xD :D

wut what no rias and no akeno wtf how can someone not have them -.- bad taste my friend bad taste xD :D

hope you finally stop with the background stories this fic till now as 10% story and 90% backstory .... it's good but really if you go like this this fic will have 1000 chapters and from the 1000 chapters 900 will be backstory.. xD [img=thinking]

Man I really can't get past the first chapter it's so badly written that I just can't I tried to give it a chance but things are happening so fast that they just don't make sense wtf man I really liked the idea but the first chapter killed every interest I had in this first some meeting about with the three factions which idk how fast happened, and then the thing with akeno then the attack then him babbling everything to her then the resurrection of akenos mother wtf man this is just the first chapter and it killed it.

God ok, we get it man, can you stop getting him to talk that much so unnatural ...always hate it when mc's talk and talk and talk like they need to explain everything in one go it's like a duty for them -.-