Extremely disappointed. The concept is good, but the execution is lacking. The laziness of the dialogue is what really set me off... Seriously, don't use stage dialogue, not only does it break the immersion of the story; it also hinders your growth as a writer. You don't learn any dialogue cues and all around; you miss out on the foundations of a good novel.
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And what are the foundations of a good novel for you? I would like to know it to improve
For you to stop writing ur trash novel
GreatSage_Master1:And what are the foundations of a good novel for you? I would like to know it to improve
HA, you don't even write a novel what right you have to stop the Author not writing their novel sh** fu** stupid I feel you like a social sh**ter on the internet and just. Sit on the basement with a computer in front and jerks off like sh**
Flappy:For you to stop writing ur trash novel
For one, dialogue should be surrounded by "quotations". Dialogue should be prompted in some way, but it shouldn't be forced. This isn't as difficult as it sounds, the reasons just have to be meaningful. For one, you shouldn't have to state the characters name, and shouldn't rely on tools such as 'she said' or 'said' in general. The interactions should be fluid, and the transitions should make sense, and should not be jarring. Interactions should be emotive, and not simply a block of text. Actions should be taken during and in-between dialogue. Something as simple as a gesture, or tell. Description of a scene is important for imagination. But again, you want to leave most details up to the reader. These are what the basics would be if they were to be mastered. But you can't master something without practicing. I don't care about grammar as long as it's legible. But if you can't write coherent sentences, then don't bother writing in English.
GreatSage_Master1:And what are the foundations of a good novel for you? I would like to know it to improve
For one, dialogue should be surrounded by "quotations". Dialogue should be prompted in some way, but it shouldn't be forced. This isn't as difficult as it sounds, the reasons just have to be meaningful. For one, you shouldn't have to state the characters name, and shouldn't rely on tools such as 'she said' or 'said' in general. The interactions should be fluid, and the transitions should make sense, and should not be jarring. Interactions should be emotive, and not simply a block of text. Actions should be taken during and in-between dialogue. Something as simple as a gesture, or tell. Description of a scene is important for imagination. But again, you want to leave most details up to the reader. These are what the basics would be if they were to be mastered. But you can't master something without practicing. I don't care about grammar as long as it's legible. But if you can't write coherent sentences, then don't bother writing in English.
GreatSage_Master1:And what are the foundations of a good novel for you? I would like to know it to improve
For one, dialogue should be surrounded by "quotations". Dialogue should be prompted in some way, but it shouldn't be forced. This isn't as difficult as it sounds, the reasons just have to be meaningful. For one, you shouldn't have to state the characters name, and shouldn't rely on tools such as 'she said' or 'said' in general. The interactions should be fluid, and the transitions should make sense, and should not be jarring. Interactions should be emotive, and not simply a block of text. Actions should be taken during and in-between dialogue. Something as simple as a gesture, or tell. Description of a scene is important for imagination. But again, you want to leave most details up to the reader. These are what the basics would be if they were to be mastered. But you can't master something without practicing. I don't care about grammar as long as it's legible. But if you can't write coherent sentences, then don't bother writing in English.
GreatSage_Master1:And what are the foundations of a good novel for you? I would like to know it to improve
Hit reply three times because it wouldn't work, but it posts three times... I'm crying.
Thank you for the tips I'll keep them in mind.
Webzayne:For one, dialogue should be surrounded by "quotations". Dialogue should be prompted in some way, but it shouldn't be forced. This isn't as difficult as it sounds, the reasons just have to be meaningful. For one, you shouldn't have to state the characters name, and shouldn't rely on tools such as 'she said' or 'said' in general. The interactions should be fluid, and the transitions should make sense, and should not be jarring. Interactions should be emotive, and not simply a block of text. Actions should be taken during and in-between dialogue. Something as simple as a gesture, or tell. Description of a scene is important for imagination. But again, you want to leave most details up to the reader. These are what the basics would be if they were to be mastered. But you can't master something without practicing. I don't care about grammar as long as it's legible. But if you can't write coherent sentences, then don't bother writing in English.
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Azure_Dark_Dragon:HA, you don't even write a novel what right you have to stop the Author not writing their novel sh** fu** stupid I feel you like a social sh**ter on the internet and just. Sit on the basement with a computer in front and jerks off like sh**
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Azure_Dark_Dragon:HA, you don't even write a novel what right you have to stop the Author not writing their novel sh** fu** stupid I feel you like a social sh**ter on the internet and just. Sit on the basement with a computer in front and jerks off like sh**
It sounds like the other reviewer wanted to point out the following: http://***.expert-editor.com/id11.html If youโre interested in rules for dialogue punctuation, Beth Hill has some neat posts: http://theeditorsblog.net/2010/12/08/punctuation-in-dialogue/ (to find other posts, just scroll down to tags and press on โdialogue tagโ)
GreatSage_Master1:Thank you for the tips I'll keep them in mind.
Thank You For Making This Review .I am Currently Inspiring From Reviews Of More Popular Books To See What a Good Story Should be Like.For Example ,Just Like You Said Here, The Dialogues Between Characters Should Feel Smooth And Fliud.Not Forced.Again,I Appreciate That You Did This Review and Helped Me Out a Little.
Thank You For Making This Review .I am Currently Inspiring From Reviews Of More Popular Books To See What a Good Story Should be Like.For Example ,Just Like You Said Here, The Dialogues Between Characters Should Feel Smooth And Fliud.Not Forced.Again,I Appreciate That You Did This Review and Helped Me Out a Little.
Well, only the first word of a sentence or important names should be Capitalized. If that'll help you. Romania would be capitalized and so would Bob. But not a car, unless that was its name/brand. For example, Google would be capitalized if you're referring to the company.
ElectroBrain1:Thank You For Making This Review .I am Currently Inspiring From Reviews Of More Popular Books To See What a Good Story Should be Like.For Example ,Just Like You Said Here, The Dialogues Between Characters Should Feel Smooth And Fliud.Not Forced.Again,I Appreciate That You Did This Review and Helped Me Out a Little.
Until Now I've Written Most Of The Words Capitalized To Make The Novel More Appealing To The Eye . Do You Think I Should Start Writing Like This : " Hello , my name is Bob and i come from Romania ." Or Should I Continue Writing Like This: " Hello , My Name Is Bob And I Come From Romania . "
Ok, so i is always capitalized when it is alone i=I. These are grammar rules, look a couple basic ones up if you can. When you capitalize each letter, you are basically screaming the words. So the first example is the best one you mentioned.
ElectroBrain1:Until Now I've Written Most Of The Words Capitalized To Make The Novel More Appealing To The Eye . Do You Think I Should Start Writing Like This : " Hello , my name is Bob and i come from Romania ." Or Should I Continue Writing Like This: " Hello , My Name Is Bob And I Come From Romania . "
https://basicenglishspeaking.com/basic-english-grammar-rules/
ElectroBrain1:Until Now I've Written Most Of The Words Capitalized To Make The Novel More Appealing To The Eye . Do You Think I Should Start Writing Like This : " Hello , my name is Bob and i come from Romania ." Or Should I Continue Writing Like This: " Hello , My Name Is Bob And I Come From Romania . "
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