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2019-09-08 05:42

The story is nice and interesting. And I won't go to the grammar as many has pointed it out. The story has processed obviously better in grammar since those reviews were left so if you are nitpicking type and would say you won't even touch this novel because the ratings and the people saying the grammar is bad. Then you are missing a lot as this author has had lots of development in that area. First when I started to read the character development could have had many developments and it didn't sometimes seem like the characters were alive but when I got further into the novel the author made the characters to come alive more and had lots of progress in that and making the story and it's flow more alive. So the story has developed quite a lot and it has potential still to become better and the author also has potential. So let me say good work with the novel and keep writing as you have developed quite a lot and the story really feels nice.

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