In my own honest opinion, the whole concept is cute. It's engaging in its own way and I actually understood where this is going. However, I cannot continue reading this no matter how good the idea was because of the way it was written. It lacks emotion and details. (though I'm no any better) but still, I advice that you work more about the quality of your chapter instead of rushing it because the premise is really good and it would be a waste if it won't improve.

as the author, it isn't too bad to rate my own book. I give my book 5 stars because,of all the books I've written,this is the best of them all. I sincerely hope that you'll like it and recommend to others. to show your support pls do vote, comment or write me an honest review. thankyou

It is very interesting story, and the plot is promising and one of kind. I recommend everyone to checking it out — you won't regret this! Keep it up the good work author-sama!

this book so far quite good for me but not very interesting. it is fun to read maybe it is slow update. i hope author can update regularly. i still wait for the male character and female character to interact or growing together. i still waiting for their spark. overall, it is nice and i hope author dont give up and improve your skill and your book will be top. good luck!

This a good readable book please keep on.The is story interesting The writer is open minded he is a teller he has a good follow up of segments and the joinery

Since there are already a lot of chapter, i will read it halfthrough and review it, all I could say this is such a cute and fluffy romance, the plot is interesting and all, there was a bit problem in writing, maybe you could go more indetail instead of moving in a fast pace, but overall it was no problem. Good job author! Keep it up.

I like the idea, it gives the necessary amount of fan-fic vibes, it's cute and fun to read, hOwEveR, I do have some problems with it. The writing quality could be so much better. It seems like every sentence has a grammatical error and punctuation is either used or not used. I suggest you use Grammarly or any other sort of grammar check system. The story development is mediocre to me, I feel like it could be much more vibrant. Speaking of which, I feel like the characters could feel a bit more realistic. It just seems like something is lacking. The world background is okay, but with more descriptive detail of how everything looks like and how things are done, I believe this story would greatly improve. The last thing is the stability of updates. As an author, I know how difficult it can be when it comes to writing something because, you know, life... but try and come up with a schedule. Even if it's once a month or so. It's better for your fans to know when you plan on updating instead of you updating whenever you feel like. Hopefully I didn't offend you in any way, I just want to give the right feedback in order for your story to thrive. Either way, you nice keep going! (please tell me you got that reference or I will be sad)

Author is often unassuming but which reader knew author's prowess in selecting and spinning magnetic words into fantastic chapters making up this oh-so-delicious tale as entitled. Thanks so much for such a delectable story. Expressions and mechanical accuracy have room for improvement to further enhance the vivid imagination of the tale.

Honest Review This one is hard for me to review as the genre is not one I normally read. I'll be a little generous with the stars. Overall though, you have a good story and if you can flesh out the grammar issues, many of the other issues will disappear as well if you ask me. The Good: Interesting plot, the characters have good chemistry and the FL doesn't annoy me which is a big plus. The Bad: The grammar... oh the grammar... I recommend Grammarly or getting an editor. I've probably misinterpreted some of the things that have been written, but I can't say for sure. Check your facts/units sometimes. You once gave a woman 100 inch hips, that's HUGE! Did you maybe mean 100 cm? 100 cm is much more reasonable. The Neutral: Short chapters... very short chapters, this breaks immersion in my opinion, but that is just my opinion. The structure is painful to read for me. One short sentence and a line break followed by another short sentence and a line break without grouping common sentences into paragraphs makes it look like just a lot of lines of text.