Item: Wife is Delicious- a tale of chasing romance
Rating: 4.2
Author: GoD_SovereignJ

GoD_SovereignJLv64yr

2020-07-13 01:00

Author is often unassuming but which reader knew author's prowess in selecting and spinning magnetic words into fantastic chapters making up this oh-so-delicious tale as entitled. Thanks so much for such a delectable story. Expressions and mechanical accuracy have room for improvement to further enhance the vivid imagination of the tale.

Wife is Delicious- a tale of chasing romance

stella2138

4.3

17 Chs

Liked by 1 people

Replies2

stella2138Author

THANKS.i'm happy for the review. to say the truth,this is the onl novel i've given my all.and i'l tell you a secret. my character theresa is me and i am her. i mean,we are one,i can feel her pain,sadness and joy. i can also understand long ren who many want to be the ml just as i do theresa.those two are the one who forced out my hidden potential.i am happy today. i don't post often but i'll make sure no week passes with no chapter. it takes me days to prepare each chapter.

4yr

stella2138Author

my story is slow in updates,but i can never drop this book. i love it myself and edit it from time to time. my exams are coming up in two weeks time so i might not update often. pls bear with me for a while. it takes me days to finally prepare on chapter and i put my feelings and passion into every chapter so every reader can feel what i feel. you can try out "chasin business concubine" in the meantime or" forbidden love-a pile of past mistakes" thanks.

4yr

Other Reviews

BAJJLv14

In my own honest opinion, the whole concept is cute. It's engaging in its own way and I actually understood where this is going. However, I cannot continue reading this no matter how good the idea was because of the way it was written. It lacks emotion and details. (though I'm no any better) but still, I advice that you work more about the quality of your chapter instead of rushing it because the premise is really good and it would be a waste if it won't improve.

5yr

stella2138Author

as the author, it isn't too bad to rate my own book. I give my book 5 stars because,of all the books I've written,this is the best of them all. I sincerely hope that you'll like it and recommend to others. to show your support pls do vote, comment or write me an honest review. thankyou

5yr

great_gamerLv5

It is very interesting story, and the plot is promising and one of kind. I recommend everyone to checking it out — you won't regret this! Keep it up the good work author-sama!

5yr

MissJebaLv11

this book so far quite good for me but not very interesting. it is fun to read maybe it is slow update. i hope author can update regularly. i still wait for the male character and female character to interact or growing together. i still waiting for their spark. overall, it is nice and i hope author dont give up and improve your skill and your book will be top. good luck!

5yr

Haven_SkyLv14

FL& her fox seriously drive me bonkers but I guess in a good way kinda! Funny when our fox shows clear signs of raging jealousy an still can me utterly clueless on his feelings for his 'master'. But such can be said bout our FL too ahaha

5yr

Daoist816253Lv1

This a good readable book please keep on.The is story interesting The writer is open minded he is a teller he has a good follow up of segments and the joinery

4yr

SleepyKolaLv12

Since there are already a lot of chapter, i will read it halfthrough and review it, all I could say this is such a cute and fluffy romance, the plot is interesting and all, there was a bit problem in writing, maybe you could go more indetail instead of moving in a fast pace, but overall it was no problem. Good job author! Keep it up.

4yr

iam_adhLv2

I like the idea, it gives the necessary amount of fan-fic vibes, it's cute and fun to read, hOwEveR, I do have some problems with it. The writing quality could be so much better. It seems like every sentence has a grammatical error and punctuation is either used or not used. I suggest you use Grammarly or any other sort of grammar check system. The story development is mediocre to me, I feel like it could be much more vibrant. Speaking of which, I feel like the characters could feel a bit more realistic. It just seems like something is lacking. The world background is okay, but with more descriptive detail of how everything looks like and how things are done, I believe this story would greatly improve. The last thing is the stability of updates. As an author, I know how difficult it can be when it comes to writing something because, you know, life... but try and come up with a schedule. Even if it's once a month or so. It's better for your fans to know when you plan on updating instead of you updating whenever you feel like. Hopefully I didn't offend you in any way, I just want to give the right feedback in order for your story to thrive. Either way, you nice keep going! (please tell me you got that reference or I will be sad)

4yr

LordSputnikLv13

Honest Review This one is hard for me to review as the genre is not one I normally read. I'll be a little generous with the stars. Overall though, you have a good story and if you can flesh out the grammar issues, many of the other issues will disappear as well if you ask me. The Good: Interesting plot, the characters have good chemistry and the FL doesn't annoy me which is a big plus. The Bad: The grammar... oh the grammar... I recommend Grammarly or getting an editor. I've probably misinterpreted some of the things that have been written, but I can't say for sure. Check your facts/units sometimes. You once gave a woman 100 inch hips, that's HUGE! Did you maybe mean 100 cm? 100 cm is much more reasonable. The Neutral: Short chapters... very short chapters, this breaks immersion in my opinion, but that is just my opinion. The structure is painful to read for me. One short sentence and a line break followed by another short sentence and a line break without grouping common sentences into paragraphs makes it look like just a lot of lines of text.

5yr

She Holds the World After Being Reborn

In the residence of the Duke of Zhenguo, the legitimate young miss, known for her icy demeanor, had transformed overnight. She, who usually regarded no one, woke up to confront anyone she saw with a few harsh words, using her frail body to intimidate so much that no one dared to touch her. Afterwards, this legitimate young miss began taking on retainers, nurturing powerful officials, engaging in commerce, and recruiting troops… Every act so shocking and audacious, it defied the norms and provoked fear in all who spoke of her! Yan Wanqing was seen as an enchantress and a disaster by the people, a thorn in the flesh and a nail in the eye that the ministers wanted desperately removed, an entity everyone shunned as if she were a venomous snake. Only the Crown Prince Mingyue, descending from the divine altar, in the dark, godless alleys, grasped her neck and repeatedly asked her, "Will you marry me or not?"

Ten Lamps · History

Not enough ratings

185 Chs

The Miracle Doctor's Two-Faced Toddler

After being hit by a flower pot, Yu Wan woke up as a poor village girl with an unconscious and fragile mother and a little brother. She was lost as she did not know this unknown ancient world. But she had to pull herself together, because her mother is still unconscious and her brother was starving. So she plowed and sowed until she had a large piece of fertile land, rising to the peak of success ever since. Just as life was getting comfortable, a man, widely feared and rumored to be a living Satan, forced his way through her door, declaring he would marry her! Although she adored beautiful men, it was rumored that this prince… “Your Grace, we don’t know each other well!” She said seriously. “Heh!” The prince smiled meaningfully before grabbing three little toddlers with chubby cheeks from behind of him. “Greet your mother.” Yu Wan was flabbergasted…

Pian Fangfang · History

4.8

1266 Chs

Lord Chu’s Wife is Wild

Chu Sihan, the county magistrate of Xuan Yue Country, is an exceptionally handsome prodigy who had risen to fame since he was a child. However, the National Preceptor prophesies that he would not live to the age of thirty, unless he marries the Lu Family's daughter from Liu Yue Village. Chu Sihan declares, “I’d rather stay single forever than to marry a woman whom I have never met.” Then— Lu Sheng, who is engaged the moment she transmigrates, scoffs. “He must be an old man to be so anxious to marry.” Then, Lord Chu reveals the truth. “Sheng, if you don’t marry me, I’d rather stay single forever.” Lu Sheng, who single-mindedly wants to earn a fortune and fulfil her dream of becoming a billionaire, says, ”Okay, then stay single forever, Lord Chu.” Then— A particular man pins her against the wall coldly, narrows his eyes and asks, “Will you marry me, or not? If you marry me, the entire Chu Mansion and me will be yours. If you don’t… I’ll hang around your house every day.” Lu Sheng, “…” This is a story about an aloof and dark Lord matched with a beautiful, powerful wife who pretends to be innocent.

Clearing Painting · History

4.7

796 Chs

The Useless Miracle Doctor Consort Is Spoiled Rotten by the Prince!

Su Yingxue died at the hands of her beloved, and she didn't even see who the man who collected her body was. After reincarnating, she destroyed bitches with one hand and tortured scumbags with the other. She was on her way to a way of victory! However, on her journey of revenge, there were always some people who wanted to protect her. "I will follow you until I die," a cold-blooded killer said. "Who wants to hurt Su Yingxue? I'll send him to hell!" An eighty-year-old doctor of poison said. "I have to protect my sister for the rest of my life," her handsome brother said. Even the powerful prince had something to say. "As long as I'm alive, Su Yingxue, you can do whatever you want in the entire continent." "Wait a second..." The longer Su Yingxue looked at him, the more familiar he felt. Why did he look so much like the man who collected her body in her previous life?

Jun Yiran · History

4.6

1235 Chs

Unlimited estates for rural beauty

Feng Xuxu, a 21st-century professor of agriculture and biology, was in secret the mastermind behind a five-star hotel. Running back and forth between the university and the hotel, it's no wonder she worked herself sick. One moment she closed her eyes, and when she opened them again, she found herself in the body of a poor village girl who had just lost her mother and then her father. Fortunately, time-travel came with a perk, the almighty space ability. After toying with some seeds, she grew thousands of acres of high-yield grains and spent her leisure time cultivating flowers. Before she knew it, she had created a landscape of thousands of acres of flowers. Munching on fruit, she ended up with thousands of acres of orchards. When she craved some greens in the wintertime, she turned around to discover greenhouses covering thousands of acres. Feng Xuxu counted on her fingers: Spring Garden, Summer Garden, Autumn Garden, Winter Garden—not one more, not one less, four in total. She nodded in satisfaction and said, “This is all one needs in life.” Meanwhile, a certain devilishly charming man approached her with a sly smile, “Little Xuxu, how do you plan to deal with me?” Feng Xuxu was in disarray amidst the wind, realizing she had forgotten about one demon yet to be tamed. In this story, both male and female leads are strong, with the male lead being physically and mentally pure and devoted.

Yilan · History

Not enough ratings

562 Chs

The Princess and Her Rough-Rider Khan

Petite Princess VS Rough Khan On their wedding day, Yelu Yan told Li Xianyun that apart from affection, he could provide her with endless wealth and honor. After the marriage, he indeed kept his promise, cherishing her in the palm of his hand. Little did he know, the more he cherished her, the deeper she burrowed into his heart, right to the very top. Not long after the political marriage with the Khitans, Li Xianyun gradually noticed earth-shattering changes around her: Initially, the commoners who disliked her began to worship her as a deity... The court officials accusing her of bewitching their lord were now pleading with her to consummate the marriage with the Khan... The most perplexing of all was her husband in name; wasn’t he the one who said he wouldn't give her emotional affection? Why was he always following her around? Little theater scene 1: One day, Yelu Yan cornered Li Xianyun against the wall. “Why are you avoiding this Khan?” “They say you might have taken a liking to your servant.” “Remove ‘might’, isn’t it obvious enough from how this Khan acts?” “But you said you wouldn’t give your servant emotional affection.” Yelu Yan held his forehead; he had indeed said too many foolish things. “The Han people always say that one should start a family and then establish a career; clearly, the two are not in conflict.” Little theater scene 2: The sun had risen high, yet Yelu Yan was still clinging to Li Xianyun. “Get up quickly, I have to leave. There are patients on the street waiting for my consultation, the good fields to the west need irrigation, the homestead plots in the east need measuring, and I have to oversee the silk reeling and dyeing... Uh...” “Your husband is a patient, don’t you care for him?” Li Xianyun looked at the man tough enough to rival ten bulls and was utterly speechless.

Fruit Jelly · History

Not enough ratings

625 Chs

General's Charming Wife Is Too Beautiful

Liu Sanniang was reborn. When she remembered her lonely end, she decided to get married in this life no matter what. She only wanted to marry an average scholar, but who knew that the tall and striking future general, Chu Yan, took an interest in her. The first time they met, she was too shy to look up at him. The second time they met, he sandwiched her against the wall and said, “Are you afraid of me?” The third time they met, he squatted down and said, “Come on, I’ll carry you.” *** After meeting a few more times, he came to ask for her hand. However, he was at least two meters tall and muscular. She feared that he might squash her to death! Once they got married, Chu Yan strode over to her and ‘forcefully’ grabbed her hand, ready to pass his life savings to her. Yet, his delicate and beautiful bride fainted out of shock… Liu Sanniang then realized that being with her ‘scary’ husband meant living peaceful and leisurely days, so her eyes narrowed as she grinned.

Skin White As Snow · History

4.5

1000 Chs

The General's Daughter Doesn’t Want to Get Married!

[Participating in WSA 2024] #SYSTEM #GENDERBENDER #CROSSDRESSING Yun Shu crossed over in a game world and became one of the suitors for the General's daughter aka the Female Lead? In this world, the Male Leads are obsessed with the Female Lead, but she has no interest in them whatsoever. To have a safe long life and avoid the bad ending, Yun Shu decided to propose the Female Lead with an assurance of a contract marriage. She also agreed with the conditions in the contract and married her in a moment of desperation to get her freedom back. After the marriage everything became peaceful and all, but why does the Female Lead look at her in a weird way? She will snuggle in her arms and even wants to sleep together in the same bed? "Why are you doing this? You know it very well that I'm not interested in girl's!" Yun Shu yelled at her. But the woman pressed her in bed underneath her as she whispered in her ears, "I'm a man and you are a woman? What's the big deal?" Yun Shu, "..."

CoffeePrincess · History

4.5

202 Chs