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2019-10-30 20:28

Emotions over the edge ... now it’s clear how it looks in practice. But tough. This is not my genre, tragedies and is so full in the world, I like Renoir, I want to write only about the good and happy without tragedies. But the author feels the master of the word, it’s like and says a little but reflects real images, emotions, experiences. The advantages are obvious in the ability to spectacularly convey the emotions and emotions of the character. Cons are also obvious in too realistic))) 5 stars. That's cool! respectfully

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Thanks for taking your time to read my piece! As-is, I'm still unsatisfied with the time jump/transition, and the ending. There's too much not conveyed, but this writing was the result of a late night writing. G'luck on your future endeavors, Ursus010!

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