Item: Two_Times
Rating: 4.4
Author: PeachyPearl

PeachyPearlLv45yr

2019-04-15 19:48

Since it's said to be a one shot, I think it's okay to review it. It's a MUST read for those who love to read about LOVE I'm not talking about romance here but a pure kind of love. Above those physical things, that sweet feeling, you have delivered that feeling really very well, Author. I'm really impressed. Please create more such stories. Thank you for letting me read this one of the Pure Love based stories on WN. I'm contented.

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