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Nou

Nou

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2017-06-21 JoinedUnited States
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  • Nou
    Nou3 years ago
    Commented

    We switched from third-person perspective to first-person perspective here now

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  • Nou
    Nou3 years ago
    Commented

    Out patrolling with a 3-year-old son, and Damian isn't near Arche... hm...

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  • Nou
    Nou3 years ago
    Commented

    "until *I* was old enough" I didn't realize you jumped into the story too, o' Sir Author.

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  • Nou
    Nou3 years ago
    Commented

    She's making an agreement with a child who is a few months old who is crawling around in the middle of the night? No freak out. No wondering how the baby got there. How the baby escaped. Instead, casually asking and waiting for a response from an infant who is a few months old?

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  • Nou
    Nou3 years ago
    Commented

    Doors are latched closed. He's crawling. Yet he can crawl out the doors?

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  • Nou
    Nou4 years ago
    Replied to dayamaryllis

    Well, because when I first wrote this review, there were like, just a few chapters?

  • Nou
    Nou4 years ago
    Replied to Tenzai

    I appreciate your enthusiasm! Try pinging the higher ups on discord or on the forums. You'll get better chance for response there. Unfortunately, I don't think the higher ups check these reviews at all.

  • Nou
    Nou4 years ago
    Replied to FlamesOfDespair

    Translation was put to a stop. Something something something politics/policies/stats/target goals.