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Veeren_Prashar
Veeren_PrasharLv41yr
2023-07-23 18:02

Mc is typical naive type just like all those japanese mc and all his harem members crying over simple things is getting frustrating

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kanukai
kanukaiLv5

The story is great. Loved it but I have never been a fan of harems. So I dropped it because of that but I decided to give a review for that exp The characters are shallow, yuki likes what theo likes and that's it, nothing that makes her stand out. But theo is fleshed out. But other than his obsession to be strong, protect yuki and gain his human form there nothing.(honestly, not sure what character development is) Not sure about world background because for the whole time I read he was in the forest then village then forest. So not sure what rating you would give that (or this so just gave it a four) For the stability of updates is a bit of a sticky one He did stop posting chapters for like 2 weeks then started posting like everything is casual. Pretty sure he gave a reason but I didn't read ip to chapter 30 or something. So I was onnly checking when the story was updated at that Point. I love a good non-human protagonist story especially when they evolve. That is orgasmic but when you add a system. You have a fucking orgy. LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT THESE KIND OF STORIES, But harem makes a story bad in my opinion. Like you could see after shina (I think) was introduced it took like 15 chapters for him to finally upgrade and before you say anything, the MC went from stage 1 to stage 9 in a chapter. So you can see how fast paced that is. But he starts blacksmithing when he is stage 10. Helping shina out and ****. So I have never been the best fan of harems. But I can enjoy a good one if I am introduced to it. OVERALL, this story is a gem and has alot of potential but not my kind story. Oh yeah and shina is a loli. Again not the biggest fan Hopefully the story is enjoyable for others

Kowareta_8
Kowareta_8Lv3

Finally read up to chap 41 or 51 (too lazy to check shameless right anyways) here is my view 1.The mc is a fucking idiot.(Yes he is ) 2.The story is fucking wholesome. 3.This novel focuses way to much on the food aspects .(I mean if you just take out the part where they talk about food up to where I read you could literally squeeze a chapter out of it ) 4.The mc could be fucking op by now if he didn't waste his points for fucking everything(Like sreiously he spend it on water ,mirror, cooking pots ,meat ,house furniture ,and many other shits even multiple times ) 5.The early chapters will make you laugh many times.(you will know just don't forget to read the comments) 6.This novel is not for a battle junkie people like me. 7.The mc is a saint I mean being good is nice and all but man I don't like those typical heroes with a justice written all over their face. 8.Just remembered the mcs system is literally a supermarket(and I mean literally clothes no problem, house furniture no problem, games no problem, food and water no problem, just say what you need ) 9.After I read up to chap 41or 51(I'm too lazy to check ok look how much have I already written you should praise me for it instead) I even started to question myself if this novel is about cultivation or a slice of life novel. So overall this novel will be a 5/5 for slice of life lovers. There are both funny and cute moments. If someone wanna say that the novel gets better in the later chaps then I don't care if the mc gets mature or some good shit will happen I'M OUT. It's just not my cup of tea.

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