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AdamLv54yr
2020-08-02 16:06

The premise? Great. The system? Interesting The power growth? Engaging The harem? So poorly done it detracts from everything else. A new character was introduced, and within a day of him knowing her, he tells her pretty much every single secret he has, for no reason other than harem. He spends more time increasing the power of his harem than he does increasing his own. Personally I'm a massive fan of a harem novel. I just can't stand when characters are forcefully inserted in the story, with no background or development and from day 1 are given 100% trust by MC. I want organic growth and interaction between the MC and any other intellectual life form, to be the same for a harem member as any other character, these ones just happen to be female, and he ends up liking them more. I don't want to be 100% sure she harem member, because of how she was inserted in a single chapter, and is basically already in. I want interaction, the same level of trust he would give a stranger, because that's what they are, strangers.

Golden Fox with System

Lruska
4.6
634 Chs

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MD_Arafat_AlamLv4

is romance that bad here??? i am a big fan of action+romance novel....... if it’s poorly done then i am out.... so could you plz tell me how is romance here i mean in this novel???

4yr
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amaturewriterLv4

think of it as rushed fluff...pretty much what the guy above says. **: do you have any recommendations ....ur choice of novels is similar to mine. just no ntr/netori or yaoi. if u have any, do tell... it would be appreciated

MD_Arafat_Alam:is romance that bad here??? i am a big fan of action+romance novel....... if it’s poorly done then i am out.... so could you plz tell me how is romance here i mean in this novel???
4yr
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MD_Arafat_AlamLv4

i do have some..... but first try 1.You cannot afford to offend my women.... well,the mc here is too op... i litarily mean too op... and two harem member but good romance + good comedy.... main action or should i say main story start after 250-300 chapter...... before that normal action,,,,romance/character development and comedy..... just try first 20 chapter 👍👍👍 then i will give you some more🙃 you will love it(maybe just try this one)

amaturewriter:think of it as rushed fluff...pretty much what the guy above says. **: do you have any recommendations ....ur choice of novels is similar to mine. just no ntr/netori or yaoi. if u have any, do tell... it would be appreciated
4yr
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amaturewriterLv4

I shall. thx

MD_Arafat_Alam:i do have some..... but first try 1.You cannot afford to offend my women.... well,the mc here is too op... i litarily mean too op... and two harem member but good romance + good comedy.... main action or should i say main story start after 250-300 chapter...... before that normal action,,,,romance/character development and comedy..... just try first 20 chapter 👍👍👍 then i will give you some more🙃 you will love it(maybe just try this one)
4yr
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MorfPPQLv10

I've read through to Chapter 54, and here are my thoughts so far: Overall: This fiction is a translated cultivation story with some innocent 'cuteness' slice of life mixed in. MC is OP and a bit oblivious to his OP-ness. Supporting characters are warm and helpful. The overall pacing is relatively OK with it focused on MC's rapid advancement at absurd rates (he does in a couple of weeks what ordinary people take a couple of decades to accomplish). Style: Enjoyable for me; it has a standard cultivation/'slice of life' style of storytelling. Story: It is a cultivation power trip in a sandbox, with some character interaction and minor sub-plots. Grammar: Pretty good for a translation, there's always awkward parts when trying to do that, so I think it turned out well. Character Score: Characters are flat, simple, but likable. MC has no backstory, his obliviousness to 'before' he started never gets addressed (how did he appear there with Yuki?). MC's sole motivation is protecting himself and his companions. He's a simple power fantasy template.

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LruskaAuthor

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5yr
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WagnLv5

primeira vez que um brasileiro reencarna em um mundo de fantasia.............................. .............................................................................................................

5yr
99
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kanukaiLv5

The story is great. Loved it but I have never been a fan of harems. So I dropped it because of that but I decided to give a review for that exp The characters are shallow, yuki likes what theo likes and that's it, nothing that makes her stand out. But theo is fleshed out. But other than his obsession to be strong, protect yuki and gain his human form there nothing.(honestly, not sure what character development is) Not sure about world background because for the whole time I read he was in the forest then village then forest. So not sure what rating you would give that (or this so just gave it a four) For the stability of updates is a bit of a sticky one He did stop posting chapters for like 2 weeks then started posting like everything is casual. Pretty sure he gave a reason but I didn't read ip to chapter 30 or something. So I was onnly checking when the story was updated at that Point. I love a good non-human protagonist story especially when they evolve. That is orgasmic but when you add a system. You have a fucking orgy. LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT THESE KIND OF STORIES, But harem makes a story bad in my opinion. Like you could see after shina (I think) was introduced it took like 15 chapters for him to finally upgrade and before you say anything, the MC went from stage 1 to stage 9 in a chapter. So you can see how fast paced that is. But he starts blacksmithing when he is stage 10. Helping shina out and ****. So I have never been the best fan of harems. But I can enjoy a good one if I am introduced to it. OVERALL, this story is a gem and has alot of potential but not my kind story. Oh yeah and shina is a loli. Again not the biggest fan Hopefully the story is enjoyable for others

5yr
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TozokuLv10

Somehow reading your series, what I want is pure wish fulfillment. MC having no problems in human city because he is OP and even if enemies appear they are crushed in one chapter. It's hard to find stories that are can be light hearted or really relaxing/healing. (I am at chapter 67)

5yr
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Kowareta_8Lv3

Finally read up to chap 41 or 51 (too lazy to check shameless right anyways) here is my view 1.The mc is a fucking idiot.(Yes he is ) 2.The story is fucking wholesome. 3.This novel focuses way to much on the food aspects .(I mean if you just take out the part where they talk about food up to where I read you could literally squeeze a chapter out of it ) 4.The mc could be fucking op by now if he didn't waste his points for fucking everything(Like sreiously he spend it on water ,mirror, cooking pots ,meat ,house furniture ,and many other shits even multiple times ) 5.The early chapters will make you laugh many times.(you will know just don't forget to read the comments) 6.This novel is not for a battle junkie people like me. 7.The mc is a saint I mean being good is nice and all but man I don't like those typical heroes with a justice written all over their face. 8.Just remembered the mcs system is literally a supermarket(and I mean literally clothes no problem, house furniture no problem, games no problem, food and water no problem, just say what you need ) 9.After I read up to chap 41or 51(I'm too lazy to check ok look how much have I already written you should praise me for it instead) I even started to question myself if this novel is about cultivation or a slice of life novel. So overall this novel will be a 5/5 for slice of life lovers. There are both funny and cute moments. If someone wanna say that the novel gets better in the later chaps then I don't care if the mc gets mature or some good shit will happen I'M OUT. It's just not my cup of tea.

4yr
10
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KurosisLv4

monster reincarnation is my faivorite genre so it is no surprise i like this story only big problem is that it needs an editor badly some parts are easy to understand but suddenly out of the blue u get a weird word ruining the flow and immersion. you will understand if you read :( btw is this translated from a different language?

5yr
10
4
Sam_RichardsonLv14

A good monster evolution story with an above average setting and background; however it suffers from a boring mc with cliche and unnecessary character choices/decisions.

5yr
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SaeTheWeeabooLv4

What a good novel. Interesting story. FINISH HER Tutututong BEASTIALITY THEO WIN!!! xp xp xp xp xp xp x xp xp xp xp xp xp xp Xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp Xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp

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