Item: Captivate [To Be Deleted]
Rating: 3
Author: Sairashah

SairashahLv55yr

2019-04-27 21:31

Ok so i am following this from the very start and sorry if anyone mind but i have to say writter did not do justice to ANY character specially Lu shen. Like come on We all know he did some mistakes in his life but who didn't..? 1. He never cheated on Hui yan. 2. He kept his marriage even when he feels she is not in love with him & think she is with him only for his money. 3. He didn't listen to his parents for her sake,he didn't mind her low class and weird behaviour. 4. He divorced her just to protect her life from his enemy. 5. After her death he take revenge of her death & stay loyal to her even he didn't need to. He only did JUST one mistake of trusting Nin Zhen. And what he got in the End? "NOTHING". Hui yan is selfish to no extent and her character as well as her love for Lu shen take 180° turn when ever she want. 1. Before her marriage she is too dumb to let everyone bully her. 2. She think LS cheated on her without confirming (she just hear and assumes eyerthing on her on). 3. After she was Reborn she practially use LS for every little thing & She is even using JX. 4. In the end She act like to love her brother but seriously she didn't..she only love herself. 5. She didn't have any feelings for her unborn child...sigh!! With all this you can assume what kind of character she has. And the last thing i don't like Twins and Wuji character at all,it is too fake,unreal neither funny nor interesting even the sleeping disorder of JX don't make any sense. I read the novel only bcoz i hope it got better and atleast have some decent ending but i am DISAPPOINTED. Give 3 start only for showing some good kind of character development of LS while all other characters only got down the ith passage of time.

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