Item: Captivate [To Be Deleted]
Rating: 1
Author: Ziavory

ZiavoryLv55yr

2019-02-23 02:53

Why do all female mc's end up with trashy males? The dude is stupid, and because he is the only handsome man in the world all girls love him. They even compare him to a god. I get that mc is pretty but really, every damn man she meets want to do her. You'd expect that because of all the abuse she went through in her last life, she'd avoid the bastard ml, but nope. she gives him mixed signals by not rejecting him. Even when he asked her 'do you hate me?' The retarded mc neither said yes or no, despite screaming yes in her mind multiple times. I don't know why brain dead stories like this have such good reviews. The reason i dropped it was when mc got aroused when she was raped by the bastard ml. Rape is rape, no matter how much you try to justify it. Author has a lot of potential, just don't write such stupid plots. This is honestly trash, the villains are bad for no good reasons. Except hating the mc, and because of that they definitely deserve to die. Because nobody in this world has the right to hate the perfectly retarded mc and her scummy perfect hubby. Go to wattpad and search up CEO, you'd get stories with the same plot and characters but with different names. It's that cliché.

Captivate [To Be Deleted]

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4.3

49 Chs

Liked by 36 people

Replies17

AgroteraLv11

Thank you for saving me from reading this novel! Ther should be a warning in the synopsis everytime a novel uses that 'falling in love with your rapist' BS... and thank you for writing a bad review! Many ppl just drop a novel but never write a review...

5yr

shinjiteLv5

It is obvious the poster did not read this with an open mind. There had been no rape as far as I ca tell (148 chapters in). While the story is typical in many ways, the author makes good effort to explain some of the cliches. If you are weak and powerless, do you recklessly offend someone rich and powerful when you have no way to protect or support yourself. Always read for yourself to draw your own conclusions. The first 10 chapters posted, 10 chapters in middle, and 10 last posted will let you know if worth it to read everything.

5yr

Cala_lieLv10

I already read 150 chapters and I'm disappointed to the female lead. She slowly falling in love to the man who cause her dead. Maybe in her past life the male lead is protecting her just like the the present because he's afraid that something bad happen to her.

5yr

Cala_lieLv10

And there is no raped happen so far.

5yr

ZiavoryLv5

Yeah, I was just really triggered after reading about the ml's 'domineering' ways. But you have to agree, the ml's trash, and the mc is too weak willed. She would probably be happier with another guy.

Cala_lie:And there is no raped happen so far.

5yr

kudo3222Lv4

I wish I had read your review before reading the novel ╯﹏╰

5yr

kudo3222Lv4

I wish I had read your review before reading the novel ╯﹏╰

5yr

readtoomuchLv5

It's so ridiculous and disappointing when they try to justify rape.

5yr

DhrindhrinLv4

Did you even read it all? It gets better and you won't be disappointed. Also he doesn't rape her it was close but he didn't. I think. The ending is very heart wrenching it's pretty good.

5yr

DhrindhrinLv4

Did you even read it all? It gets better and you won't be disappointed. Also he doesn't rape her it was close but he didn't. I think. The ending is very heart wrenching it's pretty good.

5yr

ShyshyshycyLv5

I think you did not finish reading this but i tell you that you should read and finish it you will definitely say that you're wrong😀

5yr

ShyshyshycyLv5

I think you did not finish reading this but i tell you that you should read and finish it you will definitely say that you're wrong😀

5yr

WhyAmIAHumen1Lv4

This story is different form those cliches is the beginning maybe but in the end it’s very sad.

Agrotera:Thank you for saving me from reading this novel! Ther should be a warning in the synopsis everytime a novel uses that 'falling in love with your rapist' BS... and thank you for writing a bad review! Many ppl just drop a novel but never write a review...

5yr

WhyAmIAHumen1Lv4

This story is different form those cliches is the beginning maybe but in the end it’s very sad.

Agrotera:Thank you for saving me from reading this novel! Ther should be a warning in the synopsis everytime a novel uses that 'falling in love with your rapist' BS... and thank you for writing a bad review! Many ppl just drop a novel but never write a review...

5yr

LuxSwLv5

The mc doesn't end up with any rapist o.o and doesn't end up with the dude who destroid her provious live at all

Agrotera:Thank you for saving me from reading this novel! Ther should be a warning in the synopsis everytime a novel uses that 'falling in love with your rapist' BS... and thank you for writing a bad review! Many ppl just drop a novel but never write a review...

5yr

LuxSwLv5

The mc doesn't end up with any rapist o.o and doesn't end up with the dude who destroid her provious live at all

Agrotera:Thank you for saving me from reading this novel! Ther should be a warning in the synopsis everytime a novel uses that 'falling in love with your rapist' BS... and thank you for writing a bad review! Many ppl just drop a novel but never write a review...

5yr

CloozLv13

You should read it. The ending is amazing. It dowsnt follow the troupe you or the original commenter thought it did. It was amazing.

Agrotera:Thank you for saving me from reading this novel! Ther should be a warning in the synopsis everytime a novel uses that 'falling in love with your rapist' BS... and thank you for writing a bad review! Many ppl just drop a novel but never write a review...

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