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Avyanna
AvyannaLv45yr
2019-05-01 22:09

Objectively speaking as I already read several transmigration novel, this one stand out. The plot is quite different, in a sense that the plot clearly explain to us how the FL got second chance, the rule to jump to another time line, and who allow her to do so. Unlike the other novel where the FL transmigrated like "BOOM", without reason nor explanation. Just like that. So this novel start out great, BUT the ending felt too rushed and as loyal reader I was utterly speechless with the injustice that ML got from the author. To describe the ending that ML got here it was comparable to Kaname from Vampire Knight. If you ever read that, and felt hurt for him then don't read this. It'll leave you the same scar.

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Oh no, Kaname's ending broke my heart when I learned about it the first time. But at the same time, the heart wrenching feeling is what made it so beautiful and memorable to me. I would have liked an alternate ending or something though.

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