Item: Captivate [To Be Deleted]
Rating: 3
Author: Angel_Sakura

Angel_SakuraLv115yr

2019-04-27 01:02

The novel has open ending with the ML end up with villain girl and FL with her best friend. Although the tag rebirth is here but it seem the FL is quite good at holding a grudge against the ML mistake in before rebirth. ML after rebirth did not do anything against her yet but she already judge him even when she knew the reason behind his action. I don't like the FL.she is not worth of his love. At first when I was reading it, I enjoy the story cause it was all just misunderstanding.. But when the third party mess up with the ML memory, that's I'm done. No one has the right to erase someone else memory on the name "peace". Because of memory losing, ML end up with the villaon Rather than with villain, it is better for him to end up alone.. That's what my opinions..if anyone is ok with this kind of ending.. just continue read that.. I don't mean to offend anyone..

Captivate [To Be Deleted]

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4.3

49 Chs

Liked by 26 people

Replies8

SuWonLv4

Totally agree.

5yr

Nana_alceliniaLv10

I 1000000% agree with you.. i only can sigh.. with this story... At the klimaks..eh...... i just stumped... what the heck... Aiyaaaaa

5yr

Nana_alceliniaLv10

I 1000000% agree with you.. i only can sigh.. with this story... At the klimaks..eh...... i just stumped... what the heck... Aiyaaaaa

5yr

evelistLv6

Me too, i enjoy the first misunderstanding story, but later i don’t really like the ending plot. 😔😔

5yr

shirosenpaiiLv4

I wish I've read this before reading the whole story 💔 now I'm crying. Our poor ml 😭 he deserves a better life. Now he's stuck with that bitch and her family who is after his wealth. Those sacrifices that he did is just worth that to the fl. At first I'm sorry for her, but after clarifying all the understanding she chooses to still leave. 😭

4yr

shirosenpaiiLv4

4yr

CarrotjiuLv4

I agree with you I was hoping that the HX will give LS a second chance now that she know that it is all misunderstanding..She forgive his brother for being part of her dead but she cant forgive LS for something they both misunderstand.If only she confronted LS instead of listening of the lies of Nian .She can move on earlier.It was clearly her fault she become miserable in the past because she tolerated it for so long then she blame it to ML after she lost.I thought the point of her rebirth is for the redemption of their toxic relationship 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

4yr

Kana1485Lv3

Good thing I'm still at the middle and read this review. My heart is weak at this kind of ending. I will have many sleepless night if ever I finish reading this. This kind of ending is really not my cup of tea. 😔

4yr

Other Reviews

ZiavoryLv5

Why do all female mc's end up with trashy males? The dude is stupid, and because he is the only handsome man in the world all girls love him. They even compare him to a god. I get that mc is pretty but really, every damn man she meets want to do her. You'd expect that because of all the abuse she went through in her last life, she'd avoid the bastard ml, but nope. she gives him mixed signals by not rejecting him. Even when he asked her 'do you hate me?' The retarded mc neither said yes or no, despite screaming yes in her mind multiple times. I don't know why brain dead stories like this have such good reviews. The reason i dropped it was when mc got aroused when she was raped by the bastard ml. Rape is rape, no matter how much you try to justify it. Author has a lot of potential, just don't write such stupid plots. This is honestly trash, the villains are bad for no good reasons. Except hating the mc, and because of that they definitely deserve to die. Because nobody in this world has the right to hate the perfectly retarded mc and her scummy perfect hubby. Go to wattpad and search up CEO, you'd get stories with the same plot and characters but with different names. It's that cliché.

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mellows_7Lv4

Reveal spoiler

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devils_girlLv11

Author I love you so much more ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ this webnovel is really gooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddddddddd. The plot is really really good i admire the female protagonist alot

5yr

CouchPotatoLv4

As of ch153. This is one of those novels which started out great but is going downhill as it progresses. Character development is poor ESPECIALLY in the case of the FL—The author forces its readers to sympathise with her, which is quite reasonable in the early chapters. But after the rebirth? Her actions towards the ML was beyond unreasonable! It is a rebirth where none of the things that happened in the last lifetime happened in the present, but she was so hung up with her last lifetime that she’s making it hard for the ML everytime, Always being a ***** without any rhyme or reason. Seriously author? Are u confused with the concept of rebirth? Why are u making the story like it was a case of past and present? The only good thing here i see is the char devt for the ML, i can see how the author is slowly redeeming him and i applaud her for this, that i hope she wont end up butchering this progress. Now on to the latest chs, i dont even know dude, all i can do is *sigh*

5yr

prathiiiLv4

Story went good in the beginning, ending didn’t go well,I was very disappointed with the ending, lushen was perfect for her,.this was the first novel disappointed me in Webnovel

5yr

AvyannaLv4

Objectively speaking as I already read several transmigration novel, this one stand out. The plot is quite different, in a sense that the plot clearly explain to us how the FL got second chance, the rule to jump to another time line, and who allow her to do so. Unlike the other novel where the FL transmigrated like "BOOM", without reason nor explanation. Just like that. So this novel start out great, BUT the ending felt too rushed and as loyal reader I was utterly speechless with the injustice that ML got from the author. To describe the ending that ML got here it was comparable to Kaname from Vampire Knight. If you ever read that, and felt hurt for him then don't read this. It'll leave you the same scar.

5yr

Winter_Soldier11Lv4

The ending really satisfied me..in other romance novels good friends are friendzoned forever but overbearing and illogical male leads end up with the female lead. It’s true that the ML hadn’t hurt the FL after rebirth YET, but that didn’t mean that he wouldn't...if the FL still chooses the ML..that means the sufferings of FK in her previous life had taught her nothing and she totally wasted her second chance. The ML didn’t want to hurt her in her past life and wanted to call protect her life...but he didn’t think about her mental health..dying happy is much better than living a long miserable life..and what’s worse..she still ended up dying. If ML had communicated with her more, she wouldn’t have been that miserable. Their might be spark in their relationship but the relationship wasn’t healthy. The relationship between FL and her friend is considered healthy. At least he would never hurt her the way male lead did. This story is really satisfying. Thanks to the author ^_^

5yr

yukinaOALv10

I give it a full rate!!! YOU MUST READ IT! It's really a damn good! I started reading this in another place. It's transmigration story that really make you wonder, what is the next thing that MC will do. It's like riding a roller coaster. You won't know when your heart will send flying or down to earth. It's not really a fluffy story. Balance between comedy, romance and reminisce is good. The plot is in the wonderful path. Maybe sometimes you will find it cliche, but that's not really make you think 'this again...?' No, i think it's good ╮(╯▽╰)╭ Story that i wish for every day, fortunately that the author kind enough to update almost everyday without fail. The characters are really well done, which is make me surprise that some of characters were REALLY innocent, i'm not extravagant that though... When I write this review i wonder if i can write some spoiler, but i think the other must read it first. It's really good to be neglected(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ I wish the story will always go on!!! Thanks for writing awesome story Author-sama!!! ♡⃛ヾ(๑❛ ▿ ◠๑ )

5yr

DNeelyLv11

5 stars..Love the plot Nicely pace, ML.and FL seems to be right for.each other but got to work over the misunderstandings .aiyah too much Misunderstanding but love conquers all.

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