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CouchPotato
CouchPotatoLv46yr
2019-03-09 00:04

As of ch153. This is one of those novels which started out great but is going downhill as it progresses. Character development is poor ESPECIALLY in the case of the FL—The author forces its readers to sympathise with her, which is quite reasonable in the early chapters. But after the rebirth? Her actions towards the ML was beyond unreasonable! It is a rebirth where none of the things that happened in the last lifetime happened in the present, but she was so hung up with her last lifetime that she’s making it hard for the ML everytime, Always being a ***** without any rhyme or reason. Seriously author? Are u confused with the concept of rebirth? Why are u making the story like it was a case of past and present? The only good thing here i see is the char devt for the ML, i can see how the author is slowly redeeming him and i applaud her for this, that i hope she wont end up butchering this progress. Now on to the latest chs, i dont even know dude, all i can do is *sigh*

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49 Chs

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Yashika13
Yashika13Lv5

Rebirth is like a parallel universe. She died in her original universe and she went back in time or goes to parallel universe which is exactly the same as the original by the law of universe what happened in the original universe and time will happen in current universe because of time. If events will to change then the flow of time will change and will effect the flow of universe. It's just a time travel and parallel universe theory. If she will not retaliate against ML, the exact same things, same events will happen again.

6yr
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xiaoerxun
xiaoerxunLv13

look here mate the main thing is she has backbone and is a real human, once love turns to hate it is hard for it to be reversed and unlike other novels where the FL just forgives the ML and forgets all her memories, this FL is portrayed as a human, who doesnt have flaws, and i respect her for not spreading her legs again just because the ML does one or two romantic things, and read the newest chapter youll fall in love, yo probably already have by now, but if it left at chpt 184 ill fight the authour till one of us dies

6yr
CouchPotato
CouchPotatoLv4

Nah sorry mate, i get ur point but this novel isn’t my cup of tea. It’s not just about the FL but with the plotline itself. So we’ll just have to agree to disagree 😉

xiaoerxun:look here mate the main thing is she has backbone and is a real human, once love turns to hate it is hard for it to be reversed and unlike other novels where the FL just forgives the ML and forgets all her memories, this FL is portrayed as a human, who doesnt have flaws, and i respect her for not spreading her legs again just because the ML does one or two romantic things, and read the newest chapter youll fall in love, yo probably already have by now, but if it left at chpt 184 ill fight the authour till one of us dies
6yr
xiaoerxun
xiaoerxunLv13

i agree that the plotline is messed up, i just picked a bone regarding the FL

CouchPotato:Nah sorry mate, i get ur point but this novel isn’t my cup of tea. It’s not just about the FL but with the plotline itself. So we’ll just have to agree to disagree 😉
6yr
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Ziavory
ZiavoryLv5

Why do all female mc's end up with trashy males? The dude is stupid, and because he is the only handsome man in the world all girls love him. They even compare him to a god. I get that mc is pretty but really, every damn man she meets want to do her. You'd expect that because of all the abuse she went through in her last life, she'd avoid the bastard ml, but nope. she gives him mixed signals by not rejecting him. Even when he asked her 'do you hate me?' The retarded mc neither said yes or no, despite screaming yes in her mind multiple times. I don't know why brain dead stories like this have such good reviews. The reason i dropped it was when mc got aroused when she was raped by the bastard ml. Rape is rape, no matter how much you try to justify it. Author has a lot of potential, just don't write such stupid plots. This is honestly trash, the villains are bad for no good reasons. Except hating the mc, and because of that they definitely deserve to die. Because nobody in this world has the right to hate the perfectly retarded mc and her scummy perfect hubby. Go to wattpad and search up CEO, you'd get stories with the same plot and characters but with different names. It's that cliché.

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Angel_Sakura
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devils_girl
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Author I love you so much more ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ this webnovel is really gooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddddddddd. The plot is really really good i admire the female protagonist alot

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prathiii
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Story went good in the beginning, ending didn’t go well,I was very disappointed with the ending, lushen was perfect for her,.this was the first novel disappointed me in Webnovel

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Avyanna
AvyannaLv4

Objectively speaking as I already read several transmigration novel, this one stand out. The plot is quite different, in a sense that the plot clearly explain to us how the FL got second chance, the rule to jump to another time line, and who allow her to do so. Unlike the other novel where the FL transmigrated like "BOOM", without reason nor explanation. Just like that. So this novel start out great, BUT the ending felt too rushed and as loyal reader I was utterly speechless with the injustice that ML got from the author. To describe the ending that ML got here it was comparable to Kaname from Vampire Knight. If you ever read that, and felt hurt for him then don't read this. It'll leave you the same scar.

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Winter_Soldier11
Winter_Soldier11Lv4

The ending really satisfied me..in other romance novels good friends are friendzoned forever but overbearing and illogical male leads end up with the female lead. It’s true that the ML hadn’t hurt the FL after rebirth YET, but that didn’t mean that he wouldn't...if the FL still chooses the ML..that means the sufferings of FK in her previous life had taught her nothing and she totally wasted her second chance. The ML didn’t want to hurt her in her past life and wanted to call protect her life...but he didn’t think about her mental health..dying happy is much better than living a long miserable life..and what’s worse..she still ended up dying. If ML had communicated with her more, she wouldn’t have been that miserable. Their might be spark in their relationship but the relationship wasn’t healthy. The relationship between FL and her friend is considered healthy. At least he would never hurt her the way male lead did. This story is really satisfying. Thanks to the author ^_^

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yukinaOA
yukinaOALv10

I give it a full rate!!! YOU MUST READ IT! It's really a damn good! I started reading this in another place. It's transmigration story that really make you wonder, what is the next thing that MC will do. It's like riding a roller coaster. You won't know when your heart will send flying or down to earth. It's not really a fluffy story. Balance between comedy, romance and reminisce is good. The plot is in the wonderful path. Maybe sometimes you will find it cliche, but that's not really make you think 'this again...?' No, i think it's good ╮(╯▽╰)╭ Story that i wish for every day, fortunately that the author kind enough to update almost everyday without fail. The characters are really well done, which is make me surprise that some of characters were REALLY innocent, i'm not extravagant that though... When I write this review i wonder if i can write some spoiler, but i think the other must read it first. It's really good to be neglected(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ I wish the story will always go on!!! Thanks for writing awesome story Author-sama!!! ♡⃛ヾ(๑❛ ▿ ◠๑ )

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DNeely
DNeelyLv11

5 stars..Love the plot Nicely pace, ML.and FL seems to be right for.each other but got to work over the misunderstandings .aiyah too much Misunderstanding but love conquers all.

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