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Ryan_PierceLv135yr
2019-07-12 14:10

Overall, the book has an overwhelming sense of self. This isn’t a story that follows every other trope or timeline, but one that follows its own path. Not only that, the story is consistent and makes sense, the foreshadowing is used correctly, the characters have shown steady, fluid development, and the world is created well. 5/5 stars deserved. This could be published as a paperback eventually as a bestseller if wanted.

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Legion20Author

I wish! XD thanks for your review.

XystOblivionLv12

I hope your novel gets turned into a book series. I would buy it all day.

Legion20:I wish! XD thanks for your review.
Legio9Lv10

Yup

VinxyLv2

Yaaas

ArashiTenebrisLv5

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Legion20:I wish! XD thanks for your review.
Kadam_6872Lv2

Bruh

pAInLv3

love this novel and i will follow it until the no matter what turn it takes so don't restrain yourself write to hearts content and thanks for the novel ;)

Legion20:I wish! XD thanks for your review.
Rin925Lv2

^^

Lilly3Rose3Lv15

Hell yeah

RoyalynDixonLv5

I agree 100%

DarknorthDaoLv15

Agreed

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Legion20

Legion20:I wish! XD thanks for your review.
neymarLv15

I started reading this novel cause it said that the MC was evil but I'm on chapter 23 and it seems like the character will be leaning more towards good. So Is he going to be evil or good MC?

SamStrike_Lv3

He is very ruthless, apart from his family and some friends he doesnt care about anyone's life. A person or a child can die in front of him and he wont care, he tortured a lot of people to make them spill secrets. As long as the person is not his family or one of his 4 friends they can die and he wont care. It's really good in my opinion. Moreover he constantly focus on becoming stronger and researching magic, thats what he totally and only focus about, getting stronger.

neymar:I started reading this novel cause it said that the MC was evil but I'm on chapter 23 and it seems like the character will be leaning more towards good. So Is he going to be evil or good MC?
OrnothLv13

Sigh. This is not even funny anymore. With all the things he experienced you'd figure that he'd be much more mature now. He even found peace when he for the first time experience death. And here we get, a frustrated petulant little b*tch who has anger issues. Not gonna lie i was really hooked at the start and thought this story is going to be big with all the possible worlds the MC may travel into. Instead here we are, stuck in the sh*tty world he is now, scared and dont want to die because he felt warmth for the first time. How laughable, what happened to his tempered Will? The one made him have a strength to commit suicide? I expected to much from this novel yet was betrayed. Dropping this novel.

XystOblivionLv12

I don’t support your opinion. The mind is a fickle place that can change given the environment one is placed in. Also, lith is taking a turn again in the most recent chapters with the ending of the 300 chapter long story arc so things are getting interesting once again.

Ornoth:Sigh. This is not even funny anymore. With all the things he experienced you'd figure that he'd be much more mature now. He even found peace when he for the first time experience death. And here we get, a frustrated petulant little b*tch who has anger issues. Not gonna lie i was really hooked at the start and thought this story is going to be big with all the possible worlds the MC may travel into. Instead here we are, stuck in the sh*tty world he is now, scared and dont want to die because he felt warmth for the first time. How laughable, what happened to his tempered Will? The one made him have a strength to commit suicide? I expected to much from this novel yet was betrayed. Dropping this novel.
Hutch1992Lv3

Good review

Hutch1992Lv3

Good review

leeleeanderson22Lv1

Yassss

Miken10Lv2

Ok so. If you don't like, then leave.

Ornoth:Sigh. This is not even funny anymore. With all the things he experienced you'd figure that he'd be much more mature now. He even found peace when he for the first time experience death. And here we get, a frustrated petulant little b*tch who has anger issues. Not gonna lie i was really hooked at the start and thought this story is going to be big with all the possible worlds the MC may travel into. Instead here we are, stuck in the sh*tty world he is now, scared and dont want to die because he felt warmth for the first time. How laughable, what happened to his tempered Will? The one made him have a strength to commit suicide? I expected to much from this novel yet was betrayed. Dropping this novel.
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Chef_CLv15

Great fantasy story full of mages and magic using beings. The Author does a fantastic job of combining a fairly complex magic system with a pretty simple concept of power levels. The Author uses this to write battles with realistic (in terms of the world) twists and out comes. When the MC and an antagonist come to blows and their of “equal strength” the MC does win just because of some “MC plot-armor bullsh*t” it’s because the Author laid down the groundwork for why he learned and obtained the skills and abilities to pull through. Even when someone does manage to seemingly pull some solution out of their a*s it’s because the Author left the information and reasonings behind in primitive chapters that were (mostly on purpose) meant to be overlooked as unimportant. Characters and character development is always one of the most important things to look at for in any story. In this both aspects are pretty straightforward. The MC has a lot of dark sh*t happen to him in the prologue & start of the series and that leaves us with a very untrusting and paranoid protagonist who is also severely protective of those who are are close to him. The main theme of the story is that the MC is going about his life while gaining strength in various ways in order be able to protect those he cares about and fulfill a few spoiler related goals while his interactions with those around both help and hinder him from slowly opening up to others. The Author does a good job of providing scenarios that that the MC has to contemplate while balancing his law of the jungle and his moral/human side in order to survive both physically and mentally. This series is not a “black & white” story by any means and would recommend it to any high fantasy loving reader.

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