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Legion20Author6yr
2019-01-23 14:30

Shameless 5 star review from the author, lol. Please read my work and share it if you liked it, thanks. :) :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)

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EddictedLv5

Are you sure you will not drop this because if you wont i will give it a shot(many idiots wrote magus novels here on impulse and later dropped them disappointing their readers).

Legion20Author

I am not planning on dropping it, unless life kicks me too hard, then I may be forced to take a break. Be warned, though, is not one of those novels action packed from the start, there is no harem, no constant stream of bullies nor endless violence. The start is all about devoloping the MC and his mindset. If all of this does not bother you, plz give it a go.

Eddicted:Are you sure you will not drop this because if you wont i will give it a shot(many idiots wrote magus novels here on impulse and later dropped them disappointing their readers).
EddictedLv5

Sure.as long as it is as good as warlock of magus world or age of adepts anything is fine

Legion20:I am not planning on dropping it, unless life kicks me too hard, then I may be forced to take a break. Be warned, though, is not one of those novels action packed from the start, there is no harem, no constant stream of bullies nor endless violence. The start is all about devoloping the MC and his mindset. If all of this does not bother you, plz give it a go.
Just_a_personLv5

Will he eventually find a love interest?

Legion20Author

honestly, i still don't know. He came out of his first life a little too broken, and so far life hasn't been easy enough on him to give the time to heal. We'll see together :)

Just_a_person:Will he eventually find a love interest?
SnagSoupLv12

will there be romance?

Legion20Author

atm, no. In the future, idk sorry.

SnagSoup:will there be romance?
ManaGod98Lv14

Your work is amazing! I look forward to future releases. :)

AxcZLv5

Is good, I actually read this in other websites and thought this was an official novel. I think I am addicted to this. There's some typo here and there (In the summary, I think 'achieve revenge' can be changed to avenge and 'with magic and mosters' you typo the monster). Quite fast-paced and simple, I like that. Also not many details and I have a bit difficulty in imagining the protagonist (and others) characteristics, keep changing from handsome to good-looking to average then back fort again 😂😂😂 Hopes you wont drop it. P.s. Can you add a little more in your summaries, there's some people that didn't bother to read because the summary simplicity

Legion20Author

if you find any typos, feel free to report them and I'll fix them asap.

AxcZ:Is good, I actually read this in other websites and thought this was an official novel. I think I am addicted to this. There's some typo here and there (In the summary, I think 'achieve revenge' can be changed to avenge and 'with magic and mosters' you typo the monster). Quite fast-paced and simple, I like that. Also not many details and I have a bit difficulty in imagining the protagonist (and others) characteristics, keep changing from handsome to good-looking to average then back fort again 😂😂😂 Hopes you wont drop it. P.s. Can you add a little more in your summaries, there's some people that didn't bother to read because the summary simplicity
AxcZLv5

I need to reread it to make sure of it. 😁 Ch: Volume 2 Glossary Typo: 'to becomea' in Milea, Phloria, and Belia intro

Legion20:if you find any typos, feel free to report them and I'll fix them asap.
AxcZLv5

Ch: 1 Prologue Typo: - Derek, instead, took 'and' /an/ extra beating for not being /a/ man enough to face his own problem. -The choir of begging gave him the 'goose bumps.' /goosebumps/ -..., never 'were' disciplined enough,.... /u don't need 'were'/

Legion20:if you find any typos, feel free to report them and I'll fix them asap.
AxcZLv5

Ch: 2 Prologue (2) Typo: - Carl was all he had, his family, friend, and 'confident.' /confidant/ -His only real prospect was to cram 'as a' madman. /'as a' -> 'like a' is more suited in this sentence/ -Also they had an /a/ hard time figuring what being a normal **** -Derek and Carl would spend holydays /holidays/ -It could be his career 'making' commission. /'making' -> 'taking', making make it seem like it's was him that start commissioning to other than he take the commission for himself/

Legion20:if you find any typos, feel free to report them and I'll fix them asap.
Legion20Author

fixed everything but the career making. afaik whenever you get an important job, is called as "career making", meaning that if you manage to do that well, you can get promoted/get other similarly important jobs

AxcZ:Ch: 2 Prologue (2) Typo: - Carl was all he had, his family, friend, and 'confident.' /confidant/ -His only real prospect was to cram 'as a' madman. /'as a' -> 'like a' is more suited in this sentence/ -Also they had an /a/ hard time figuring what being a normal **** -Derek and Carl would spend holydays /holidays/ -It could be his career 'making' commission. /'making' -> 'taking', making make it seem like it's was him that start commissioning to other than he take the commission for himself/
AxcZLv5

Oh, that's what you mean. P.s. I am too lazy writing right now, I will reread and write the other tomorrow.

Legion20:fixed everything but the career making. afaik whenever you get an important job, is called as "career making", meaning that if you manage to do that well, you can get promoted/get other similarly important jobs
D_slayerLv5

Will he be able to remain in the world forever

D_slayerLv5

Will he be able to remain in the world forever

dragon17031989Lv5

Xp

Morto_haiLv12

Amazing storytelling Not cliché at all

NomorevtrLv6

I have to ask, why didn’t you stay with the Alien Soldier plot?? Don’t know why all the authors go to the cliche fantasy world and don’t stay with some sci-fi/space opera...(there are several novels with the MC getting transferred/reborn into several worlds, but they always end in the fantasy one...)

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Chef_CLv15

Great fantasy story full of mages and magic using beings. The Author does a fantastic job of combining a fairly complex magic system with a pretty simple concept of power levels. The Author uses this to write battles with realistic (in terms of the world) twists and out comes. When the MC and an antagonist come to blows and their of “equal strength” the MC does win just because of some “MC plot-armor bullsh*t” it’s because the Author laid down the groundwork for why he learned and obtained the skills and abilities to pull through. Even when someone does manage to seemingly pull some solution out of their a*s it’s because the Author left the information and reasonings behind in primitive chapters that were (mostly on purpose) meant to be overlooked as unimportant. Characters and character development is always one of the most important things to look at for in any story. In this both aspects are pretty straightforward. The MC has a lot of dark sh*t happen to him in the prologue & start of the series and that leaves us with a very untrusting and paranoid protagonist who is also severely protective of those who are are close to him. The main theme of the story is that the MC is going about his life while gaining strength in various ways in order be able to protect those he cares about and fulfill a few spoiler related goals while his interactions with those around both help and hinder him from slowly opening up to others. The Author does a good job of providing scenarios that that the MC has to contemplate while balancing his law of the jungle and his moral/human side in order to survive both physically and mentally. This series is not a “black & white” story by any means and would recommend it to any high fantasy loving reader.

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