Writing Quality : 3/5 (quite a few spelling mistakes and grammatical errors, but readable) Story Development : 2/5 (too gamelike, and not following common sense frequently) Character Design : 2/5 (too perfect character design. MC is best at anything he does, and no one else is even 1% as good as he is). Updating Stability : 4/5 World Background : 3/5 (decent attempt to portray the underworld). Okayish fanfic. Can read if u don't have anything interesting. MC is pretty smart, no one else is very smart. In one year, MC trains his mons to be stronger than Champion level (something others have to work for decades). No one else can think of better tactics or strategies than MC. MC gives more importance to collecting batches rather than destroying an evil organization or even saving his girlfriend's lives. (So if his girlfriend is prisoned in a city and there are 2 cities which have gyms between that city and where he is at, he'll only go to save his girlfriend after he collects those 2 batches). Too much 18+ content. Started with MC banging every female he could see. Then it became relatively stable when he got a couple of girlfriends, and in Unova, it again went back to banging every female he could see. So ya, pretty dumb overall, but atleast the fanfic is consistent in what it does (and there are frequent mass release). The Pokemon fights are interesting to read (kinda the reason why I stuck so long), but again it has sidetracked to too much fucking and less training and fighting.
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