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Sage_Fire
Sage_FireLv23yr
2021-02-11 08:29

It's A person Who is dreaming.Plain and simple. He is Getting all rare Pokemon(Not possible) The plot is Similar to Chinese Wuxia Bullsh*t. He is making The professor look Like a newb, Are u freakin' Fcking with us? 1-10 years,.. okay then professor is atleast 500 years old, And U Outdone him in 80days? Does a Pokemon professor would not know about Beedrill Being violence bullies? This is so full of sh*t that even Infinite Space pocket Can be filled. What are they? Is their IQ so low? This Author'd brain is pea sized Multiplied with a 1×10^-1000000000000000....000000 size This is so full of cr*p they i had to say it, This Is an insult to World background, Character design and Grammar is sh*t And it looks and Feels Brain cell-KILLING to read, Even Majin Buu Would go into a state of degradation, This author thinks all people Like to chase skirts, Here i was Expecting Some Character development, And Now you Shi* on Those expectations. YOU CAN'T EVEN KEEP ALREADY EXISTING CHARACTERS FROM GOING OOC YOU DO NOT DESERVE TO BE AN AUTHOR, LISTEN PEOPLE WHO THINK LOGIC AND WANT THEIR BRAIN CELLS CASUALTY IN THE LEAST, DO NOT READ THIS SH** FCKIN AUTHORS CAN'T YOU CONTROL YOUR FREAKING HORMONES, GO AWAY FREAKIN ARROGANT BAST*RDS AND TRY TO NOT LET YOUR CHARACTER FROM GOING OOC DON'T WRITE THIS, ALL THIS, HO WRITE THOSE CHINESE NOVELS.

Journey Towards Greatness

Evil_God_ZARAKH
4.5
1381 Chs

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Devil_Hex
Devil_HexLv5

Lol, that's a passionate review 🤣🤣🤣 But sadly it's true too.

3yr
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KingNovaCrimson
KingNovaCrimsonLv2

I agree 100% with you comrade.

3yr
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twilight786
twilight786Lv2

Comrade.

1yr
1
JoyousRebellion
JoyousRebellionLv1

wow you really poured your heart out on this review

5mth
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Anos_1717
Anos_1717Lv4

well, most fan novles here follow the chinese wuxia bulls**t 🥲

2mth
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RJB_001
RJB_001Lv11

I have no idea how there are so many good reviews. The English is horrendous, and despite receiving numerous offers for editing it doesn't improve at all, the plot is incredibly cliche and predictable, the MC is completely flat and boring. All in all there's really nothing I can find likeable about the story, I guess the biggest reason it's popular is because it was one of the earlier and longer stories on Webnovel. I can't really think of much else.

5yr

rg1400
rg1400Lv6

this pokemon fan-fic has been the most consistent and entertaining one for me...... Recommended for all who love pokemon.. The plot has not messed up and most of all it keeps going. Well planned and great writing..

5yr
Aishiya007
Aishiya007Lv7

I give 5 star review for Gengar.............................................................................................................

5yr
HaremQueen
HaremQueenLv4

I really don’t like that fact that the mc just goes around having s£x with someone at every damn town he stays in. Worse of all, they’re all one night stands. What’s the point of having s£x if it’ll only be for a single. I can understand it if he actually dated the girl, but noooo...it’s only for cardinal pleasure. Every “hot” girl, as hot as a show for 8 year olds anyway, that sees him fall into something I call the ‘Wet Dream Syndrome’ and instantly gets smitten by him. I don’t give 2 sh!ts how handsome or how “***y” he looks, it’s only in the fantasy of the author’s head, if he thinks sh!t like that is real. I don’t watch a lot of Pokémon, but I still read this anyway because it had a lot of chapters and the synopsis sounded not half bad. Boy did I regret it... the author really needs to learn how to use punctuation to separate his sentences. A few grammar errors here and there but it was acceptable. I couldn’t bring myself to read any further than chapter 10 so I don’t know what happens after that, but I’m sure it’s all going to be the same crap or much worse.

5yr
Kritiko
KritikoLv10

The synopsis is exciting, and being a reincarnated grandpa that likes pokemon is new to me which then garnered my attention in reading it. But, jokes aside, the writing style and grammar, for me, is a bit on the low end of my expectation almost conparing to a highschool literature work 2.0 version. Last but not the least, the author needs an editor(seriously recomended). The pronoun usage sucks. Honestly, I find it amusing for getting good reviews. I can only wonder.

5yr
usernanne
usernanneLv4

Its a "with a system" and "god came and gave me wishes for no reason" story. ((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((/////////))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

5yr
HolloH
HolloHLv5

Only read up to chapter 10. Grammar could use improvement. Inconsistant time sequencing, jumping around w/ no real flow. Author doesn’t delve beyond the surface of any character, including the Mc. Despite Mc supposing to have the mind of an old man, he doesn’t show the wisdom of even an *****. Has sex w/ another character randomly, completely out of nowhere w/ no lead up. This character was introduced a paragraph before you find out they have sex. When the author addresses this, it is supposed to be assumed by the reader that this grandpa has mad game, conquering a woman who works in customer service presumably for years in a span of a conversation, and naturally both parties have no mixed feelings about randomly f**king and then saying “bye have a nice life”, never to meet again. Like, hah??? Unless your looking to invest in the long hall and hope it gets better, there is far better stories and **** on this website, would not recommend this work in the slightest. Oh and in the very first fight his pokemon uses more than 4 moves. Like WTF, this Gramps reincarnated after being beaten over the head by a gameshark or some s**t.

5yr
ADS
ADSLv6

I don't know why a lot of people give this story 5 star. This story not about pokemon with it slogan "catch them all" its about a man who always find beautiful women and "f'ck them all". Every filler in this story is only about mc find beautiful women and f'ck her that very disappointed. This story will be great if author remove majority of that f'cking scenes I only read until chapter 50 and already bored

5yr
GhostyGodZ
GhostyGodZLv5

Combat scenes are lackluster and boring. ....................................................... ....................................................... ....................................................... .......................................................

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