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hadiex
hadiexLv145yr
2019-04-28 19:46

I'm enjoying read this novel, the character are great, fleshed out, and not to forget the mc age so he and her companion have fun moments, I'm enjoying that.... Actually, i wanna drop this novel when stella got sys*** from mc, but I'm glad to continue read and finally have another favourite support character..... Keep up the good work author san, and please make more interesting chapter... I'll try to read another of your novels later

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Thank you! So glad you are enjoying the story!

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