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Chillis
ChillisLv125yr
2019-04-18 05:56

After catching up to the latest chapter (98), this novel leaves me confused. Not the content itself, but the fact that hardly anyone has read this work of art. It has the typical cliches we all love, but the author puts his own spin on it. This novel contains: Transmigration, second chance, Magic, system, kingdom building, and with one love interest. If I was also to depict this novel in one word, it would be “Warm” as it is adorable and based on having/forming strong relationships. I would recommend reading at least a few chapters to see if it fits your taste. However, dare I say, the novel only gets better the further you read.

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Sdrawkcab
SdrawkcabAuthor

Thanks!

Bad_Wentian
Bad_WentianLv2

The problem with romance or just one female partner with no h-scene is that who knows if the girl would show sweetness and care in front of MC but f**king another man behind his back.

Sdrawkcab
SdrawkcabAuthor

I never plan to have any of that in this story.

Bad_Wentian:The problem with romance or just one female partner with no h-scene is that who knows if the girl would show sweetness and care in front of MC but f**king another man behind his back.
shashank_bhatt
shashank_bhattLv14

So it's not a harem??

Sdrawkcab:I never plan to have any of that in this story.
Sdrawkcab
SdrawkcabAuthor

Nope

shashank_bhatt:So it's not a harem??
DioSDeLCaoS
DioSDeLCaoSLv10

en la etiqueta dice haren

MengHaoDS
MengHaoDSLv7

does the mc of this novel op?

Sdrawkcab:Nope
MengHaoDS
MengHaoDSLv7

does the mc of this novel op?

Sdrawkcab:Nope
Sdrawkcab
SdrawkcabAuthor

Yes, but not in a way that ruins the story

MengHaoDS:does the mc of this novel op?
WorstNameEver
WorstNameEverLv5

Ntr is not allowed, author ain't korean (i think atleast) so it probably isnt in it

Bad_Wentian:The problem with romance or just one female partner with no h-scene is that who knows if the girl would show sweetness and care in front of MC but f**king another man behind his back.
Kris_Watson
Kris_WatsonLv6

by chapter 150 the chance of NTR is non-existant. they are litterally connected at a soul level.

Sdrawkcab
SdrawkcabAuthor

Nope. I'm from the US

WorstNameEver:Ntr is not allowed, author ain't korean (i think atleast) so it probably isnt in it
_Zzzz
_ZzzzLv4

What logic is this? Is this why people like harem? Have you ever spoken to a girl?

Bad_Wentian:The problem with romance or just one female partner with no h-scene is that who knows if the girl would show sweetness and care in front of MC but f**king another man behind his back.
Ethlathini
EthlathiniLv11

Lol

_Zzzz:What logic is this? Is this why people like harem? Have you ever spoken to a girl?
Lord_CronutX
Lord_CronutXLv4

Cool

Lord_CronutX
Lord_CronutXLv4

.

Novel_Crazy
Novel_CrazyLv2

Wat

Bad_Wentian:The problem with romance or just one female partner with no h-scene is that who knows if the girl would show sweetness and care in front of MC but f**king another man behind his back.
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This is a book that keeps making me almost stop reading then drawing me back in until the next thing that makes me want to stop reading. Very early we are introduced to happy slaves who are just so happy to be slaves... yea almost dropped it right there but thought I would give it a bit more time as it was so early in the book. The magic system was interesting and I started to like the characters. Then comes the child rape. Like 3 different times in not many chapters. Once was jarring, three times was when I should have stopped. Especially as it changed at least one of the characters so much that they are now fairly unlikeable. But I enjoyed the magic system and wanted to see what would happen with it if nothing else. Maybe this was just a one off dark beginning set up that would never come again? Then comes the stupidest king to ever live. Okay sure, I thought, he is a puppet of the real people in charge of the kingdom. Oh wait no, a few chapters later we learn that he is actually smart and in charge. Really? So smart that he signs the dumbest and most lopsided contract I have ever seen? Would you trust a complete stranger you have never met before and sign a life or death contract with them without even reading said contract? Now I am left bored to tears by all the politics and magic is so far from the story I don't even know when it is coming back. I am done. It is a good premise and the world seems like it could be fun but the author REALLY needs to work on being more stable. There are too many changes to the kind of story being told, the tone, and so on.

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