The beginning gets min/max nerdy wordy. No doubt. But, if you can suffer through that and the author's mostly-but-not-really-comprehensive-pages-of-wiki scattered throughout the chapters plus some good ole intuition to fill in based on context, you'll find yourself in the middle of an epic with multiple main characters, a brewing apocalypse with all the divine onlookers plotting behind the scenes, and ultimately, a tale of someone who should be tremendously disadvantaged spitting on the notion and turning it in her favor. Writing: 4 stars. Would've been 5 but the author's shorthand during "oh, you don't understand this system I've invented by cobbling together n+1 other systems?" data dumps wears quickly. Stability of Updates: 5 stars Story Development: 4 stars. Some arcs are that movie you're sitting in going "shouldn't it have ended already?". Mixed with some well-meaning conflict fatigue, -1 star. Character Design: 3 stars. As epic heroes, the characters are fleshed just fine, and there's even a plot device to explain some of the shallows, but overall, the characters really don't show much depth beyond being very good at murderhoboing. Like I said, the first major arc has its reasons. If the latest arc doesn't address that some, then this will stay at 3 stars. World Background: 4 Stars. The world itself is glossed over, but the system it runs on is mainly explained, even if we don't all grasp the explanations. -2 for how shallow the understanding of the world is, +1 for the fact that the system is a hodgepodge so there SHOULD be far more explanation of it rather than the world. If you hit chapters 250+ you'll understand more as to why this was a difficult category to accurately judge. Regardless of my attempts to be objective, there's always subjectivity because even my views on objectivity are subjective to my own understanding of it. Overall, remember that 3 represents AVERAGE, not fire fuel. Give it a read, convince yourself to hit over 30 chapters and while you might not stomach an all-in-one-go, you'll certainly find something worth coming back to.

Do you like RPGs? Do you like leveling? Do you like all the min-maxing involved? Read this stuff. It is heavily based on DnD and similar systems, first chapters are basically all about character creation and half of the novel seems to be about just leveling (and getting OP). Terms are complete Chinese to non-DnDers. And it made me reinstall NWN with PRC and play Rakshasa true neutral Dread Necro. Even though MC of this novel is neutral good and despises grays...

As someone with no D&D background, I'm thrilled that the author succeeds in drawing in the reader by virtue of a fast-paced, action packed story that literally rips you past any numbers you don't understand as you are drawn to the next battle and evolution. Starting with an over-powered (and over-knowledged) protagonist instead of the usual weak-to-strong lets us revel as the characters rip through the world as they wish, instead of as the current week story arc requires. The characters in this lovingly crafted action epic are overpowered due to knowing the ins-and-out of their world and systems,n rather than chance encounters and storyline deus-ex-machinas gifting strength. I highly recommend you keep reading until Sama Rantha leaves the dream and the story splits (11 chapters in), it caters less to stat numbers and focuses more on world and character; it maintains both storylines at once to keep either path from getting monotonous.

This is a very enjoyable story. Each chapter weaves a bigger story, and they come out regularly so there is no week long waits. Shows a realistic view of a 'system' or D&D type world, with great characters who you will enjoy watching explore their reality. A lot of numbers and levels, but they are actually tied in to the story and explainable. All in all, a real diamond!

I just finished reading book one, blitzed through 285 chapters, this is great; I can say it was difficult at first because some terms were unfamiliar to me but your glossary and searching (for images of fantasy creatures) helped. Around chapter 48 I got hooked and haven't put it down much since. Looking forward to the rest!

If you can make it past the info dump in the beginning, this story is absolutely 5 stars. You don't have to understand all the mechanics to enjoy it. If you love details and LitRPG mechanics then you will be in heaven. Massive world building, immersive characters, game mechanics that are consistent and make sense. I have not read or noticed Deus ex machina or plot armor inconsistencies. Amazingly enough, the second book 'Far Future' is even more fantastic. Pretty much non stop kick ass and loot everything, high energy fun. Thanks for writing and sharing this brilliant story!

Greatest book on this site if it was a e-book I buy it . It story is well thought out made to make the reader thinking about the action and strategies in the book. Just love this book.

I just can't. I love this kind of novel, I love RPGs, I love table top games, I know way too many systems, and I just can't for the life of me follow what the **** is going on in this novel. I understand the basic premise, it is the supposed system that is just a fever dream of madness. If it is the author's own system, they have lifted waaaay too much from existing systems without explaining any of it. If it isn't, I can't figure out what system it is based on (looked like pathfinder at first but there are way too many differences). I wanted to like this and I ended up just banging my head in frustration.

This story can be counted as the highest form of quality one can find on Webnovel or any other similar website and is quite frankly more than worth to be sold as a book. The characters are diverse and interesting, the story is hauntingly addictive and the world-building is simply to die for. I binged 182 chapters in two days (the chapters are quite sizeable) and I will continue to follow this story closely in the future. That said even though I think this story deserves the highest possible rating, there are some aspects that could be improved to make the novel more accessible to people who are not veterans when it comes to Dungeons & Dragons. I sadly have never played the game and am only familiar with digital game jargon that is also used in LitRPG. The first 13/14 chapters are completely filled with build choices that are almost impossible to comprehend other than the meaning of the stats (Con, Str etc.). It would be perhaps helpful to make a page (I believe it is called a glossary) that explains all abbreviations, class abilities, differences between talents, masteries and feats and specific game terms to new people (like MAB, saves, AC etc.). I believe that this is currently the only missing requirement to really have this story embraced by the masses and take its rightful place amongst the top 3 on this website. Apart from these recommendations I can only thank the author for giving me a chance to experience reading such a gem.