another trashy fan fic of Soul land😑....
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The author here, well, i am obviously giving myself a five star and to tell you about the novel. The MC will have twin spirits and both of them will be Dragon Spirits. This won't be a harem novel and it will only have mc x rongrong. I will obviously add some H-scenes when both of them are of age. So, guys support this novel and also let it reach the top 20 in the ranking.
So let me break down why I gave this review: Writing Quality: The authors writing quality is decent. It’s not making me gag, but at the same time it’s not the best writing I have ever seen. As such it’s a decent three for writing. Stability of Updats: The only reason I gave this a four is because honestly I don’t know how fast he updates, all I know is that he does. For me that at least warrants a four star. Story Development: This is where the story really starts disappointing me, like most other fan-fictions do. First of all the MC is far too OP. He is a rank 57 when he is what 12 and his true combat ability is even better then that. The only advantage he has is his strong spirit and his previous memories yet he learnt the art of hidden weapons by HIMSELF WND better then the genius tang san. HOW DOES THAT EVEN MAKE SENSE. Not only that, I fee like Ryusei is almost the same as Tang SAN. Spirit Hall killed his parents, he treats tang hao as a father figure and he is in shriek academy. That’s not even the end of my complaints. I mean why is the author shipping with essentially every female in the Shrek academy. I don’t even get that!!! One of my favourites part of the original novel was Rong Rong and Oscars love story but now as a twelve year old she is already dreaming of making him her husband. And just a small portion of my complaints. Character Design: The character design is even worse than the story development. I mean one of the most fundamental responsibilities of an author is to make the reader relate to the MC but this author seems to be doing the opposite. At first Ryusei was too soft and ***** which I honestly did not mind as it was a good change of pace for me. BUT THEN THE SPIRIT HALL ATTACKED. Now the guy seems to be constantly going through puberty and is extremely unreasonable. He is the main reason that I can’t even bear to finish the story, though I did get pretty deep into it already. Finally the world design: What can I even give this??? This is a fan fiction and up-till now the author has not added anything new to the world that would push up the rating to a three or four star. Overall the story really only deserves a two star.
Shamelessly going to give Evil_Dragon a 5 stars, since I believe this fanfiction has a lot of potential. It's worth a read, and you probably won't be disappointed by it at all.
since you are the author of one of my fave. original novel. i will shamelessly give this a 5 stars rate. hoping that this will be good if not better as your first novel.
Rushed cliche revenge with no point Mentaly retarded characters and dip sh it Mc ................. . . .v.v.. .v.v. . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . .
I dont really like the mc mindset, but to manipulate their comrade like that???,, its fine for mc to growing hate SH well u are the writer we are the reader,, dont take it to heart,, chill
Want some points? 1-slow update with already existent content to copy from(TRUE) 2-why is this going for romantic way that doulou did? I would rather see one POV of romance between mc and rr not anyone else or harem with the mc???? 3- why the **** is the mc still not transforming? What the faq is going on? 4- are you sure you have read the story? 5- and dam he is not even looking at 60-90000 years old spirits on his 6th ring? 6-my god can you put them both in the same room? Romance needs a notch up. 7-and why the faq is this guy not utilzing good materials for hidden weapons?! 8-you are doing filler chapters at max slow pace? Howmuch are you packing at your patreon? Do you think you would earn a fortune this way? Its becoming less enjoyable how stupid you are writing, acting and thinking. 🤔 overall this is beyond stupid, truly one more push and dropped, its just that bad WITH EXISTENT CONTNT TOO, do you see how funny this is? If i wasnt in college i would probably do some stories that stomp this.
Awesome novel.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 Keep up the great work. 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 Is it 140 yet? Not yet it seems. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
It's indeed a good read. The development of the story is really good and while the MC is a powerhouse he does have some limitations, MC is badass but also extremely intelligent and somewhat ruthless. But fair warning the story drags out a bit in the middle, but later picks up speed again.
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Sebastian Swann, an outstanding graduate of Slytherin, heir of an ancient alchemy family, and the richest man in the magic world. 12 years after graduation, he returned to Hogwarts as a professor... Snape: "Sebastian, what is the reason why our richest man chooses to be a small professor at Hogwarts?" Sebastian: "To make Slytherin great again" Snape: "Tell the truth..." Sebastian: "To make Hogwarts great again! ... Put away the truth serum, Severus, you are so boring." Snape: "Tell the truth" [ ——— ] [ ——— ] [ ——— ] [ ——— ] [ "A translation of one of my favorite fan fics, the author of this is a wonderful talent that I admire the most out of my favorites. So, I came here today to copy and paste this onto this site, so that you can recognize this guy's talent. Because, I mean, I misclicked this, I stumbled into this on accident, the reviews was low, which I don't understand. So, here, enjoy Sebastian Swann's story." ] [ TRUE Author: "three-to-four" ] [ Read in FanMTL ]
A poor sod got violently sucked in an ultra-dimensional wound in reality, leading him to his kidnappers, hyper-intelligent, biologically immortal space-faring magical lizard-frogmen things to be turned into a living tool, weapon, and mode of transport all three in one against his will… Though his new form was oddly akin to the true form of the Pokémon number 720, Hoopa, in both general appearance and power, let's see how a human-turned-monster of mass destruction fares in this universe of grim darkness and how the universe and its players react to him as he now was an integral part of the Great Game, for the better or the worse. Everything goes to their respective owner. It's crossposted on Webnovel, Space Battle, Scribble Hub, and Royal Road.
Struck down by lightning, he thought his life had ended—only to awaken in a world that shouldn’t exist. A world where the Nightmare Spell dictates fate, where creatures of darkness lurk beyond the veil of dreams, and where only the strong survive. But unlike others, he knows what’s coming. He has read this story before. With a Divine-Level Aspect shrouded in secrecy, a system modeled after an unstoppable tyrant, and an evolving mastery of swordsmanship and unarmed combat, he will carve his own path in the shadows. He is neither too weak nor too strong, but every battle makes him stronger. Every enemy falls, leaving behind strength for him to claim. And as the world spirals toward chaos, he remains an unknown force, hidden in the depths of history. This is the story of the Sovereign of the Unknown. ---- it will be a little different than the original novel because I changed somethings
Divine Calamity Strikes the God Realm, Huo Yuhao drags Tang San into the chaotic space-time vortex, perishing together. When he opens his eyes again, he finds himself back in his childhood. "We have to do something for this twisted world, don't we?" —The Mother of Soul Beasts, the bearer of original sin, Huo Yuhao, said. He originally planned to lead his former companions toward a different future, but when he comes to his senses, he notices that their gazes toward him had started to change, subtly and strangely. "Huo Yuhao, you still say you're not a succubus!?" "What? Awakening a martial spirit costs money!?" "Why is it that even though I'm a Soul Master, I don't get any Soul Master subsidies? Back in the days of the Spirit Hall a thousand years ago..." "With the rapid development of soul devices nowadays, the resources of the Douluo Plane are being over-exploited, leading to decline. We should resist!" —Tang San, the environmental protection advocate, said this after reincarnating into this era with Huo Yuhao following their mutual destruction.
This story is going to serve as a repository for all of my different stories that are either discontinued or complete with less than ten chapters. Every 'chapter' in this story will be it's own contained story, and each day I will endeavor to post a new one up for everyone to read.
The important people from Sunny's life and major people of the world suddenly gets teleported inside a theater?
(c) to the owner of the picture above ^ (c) to the owner of all the story( I put it here for my own to read, my place/town/home have low cignal and I do this to download and read offline. ) (* need to go down just to have cignal and download it) -for my friends too we both love to read some erotic thanks -Report it if you want -rate it if you want -webnovel will delete it. I just read for my own -If you know something like this apps that can Hide so no one read it and change background(black) please let me know so I can use it. - to owner if you want to this to taken down just comment and I will...(so ya white knight wanabe won't bother so much) -erotica.c*** -sexstories.c** -milfstories.c***
"Huh? Where am I?" ------------------------------------ Without knowing, Kiyotaka founds himself in a place that defies everything that served as the base of his logic. How will he adapt to this new situation? How will he handle a twin brother who also happens to in the situation as him? ----------------------------------- I do not own anything. I am merely writing a fanfic.
