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Evil_Dragon
Evil_DragonAuthor6yr
2018-11-04 13:06

The author here, well, i am obviously giving myself a five star and to tell you about the novel. The MC will have twin spirits and both of them will be Dragon Spirits. This won't be a harem novel and it will only have mc x rongrong. I will obviously add some H-scenes when both of them are of age. So, guys support this novel and also let it reach the top 20 in the ranking.

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vj8250
vj8250Lv12

Hehe finally a good author is starting another novel please don't drop like others

Evil_Dragon
Evil_DragonAuthor

Of course I won't

vj8250:Hehe finally a good author is starting another novel please don't drop like others
junfriday
junfridayLv5

cool. just don't drop Reincarnation in ATG pls. I want to see Ryusuke x Jasmine.

Greed696
Greed696Lv5

I'm expecting a lot from this. I hope this would be as good, if not, better than your other work. I will not be reading this yet because I like to binge read. I'll probably wait after 15-20 chapters so I hope that this would not be dropped.

Evil_Dragon
Evil_DragonAuthor

Of course I won't drop it.

junfriday:cool. just don't drop Reincarnation in ATG pls. I want to see Ryusuke x Jasmine.
Evil_Dragon
Evil_DragonAuthor

It will be.

Greed696:I'm expecting a lot from this. I hope this would be as good, if not, better than your other work. I will not be reading this yet because I like to binge read. I'll probably wait after 15-20 chapters so I hope that this would not be dropped.
NotYourCat
NotYourCatLv11

Author-sama, make the girl with black cat (or panther?) spirit become one of his girl too!! Just her with rongrong are fine!!

HKG
HKGLv5

Hahaha author i love your idea you pair the mc and rongrong but can you add the cat girl(black panther) shes the partner of the white tiger holder i think shes the most hottest girl in duolu dalu except of the holder of god of rukasha, i love rongrong and that girl in tangsan group her name is I forgot her name shes the cat girl but i think you know who am i talking about right, author? Shes a cool character in duolu dalu 1.

Evil_Dragon
Evil_DragonAuthor

you do know that i said no harem

HKG:Hahaha author i love your idea you pair the mc and rongrong but can you add the cat girl(black panther) shes the partner of the white tiger holder i think shes the most hottest girl in duolu dalu except of the holder of god of rukasha, i love rongrong and that girl in tangsan group her name is I forgot her name shes the cat girl but i think you know who am i talking about right, author? Shes a cool character in duolu dalu 1.
AcOu0KinG
AcOu0KinGLv4

ok but pls don't forget the ATG Fanfiction it would be great if u focus more on ATG till u release at least 100chap then start releasing chaps of this ff

YumGod
YumGodLv10

tbh i like u wrote about a person reborn in another novel but i don't like it when a mc reborn to a world he don't even know lmao oh well gonna maybe read it if people say good

Snake551g
Snake551gLv12

What the release schedule like?

Sunnybee123
Sunnybee123Lv12

Later after you cover the first book span can you have it connect to the second and third book like he pretends to be the teachers of each original Mc in those books ;)

SupremeOverlord123
SupremeOverlord123Lv4

No heram is batter and thx for the chappa Arthur I love it 😍👍👍👍

SupremeOverlord123
SupremeOverlord123Lv4

I love it when you put the spirit rank a lot easier to find the rank 👍👍👍😊

addict_122
addict_122Lv14

Don’t drop u r novels and update more chapters

mati98akd
mati98akdLv6

Author a question, will you just upload it in your patreon? or every so often in webnovel too? unfortunately I wanted to donate but the dollar is a bit high in my country haha (Argentina)

Evil_Dragon
Evil_DragonAuthor

I will upload it on webnovel too

mati98akd:Author a question, will you just upload it in your patreon? or every so often in webnovel too? unfortunately I wanted to donate but the dollar is a bit high in my country haha (Argentina)
uSeer
uSeerLv5

No harem... I like that. Because most stories fck up with harem and the strory becomes rly bad.........

nemery11
nemery11Lv6

i red there manga a long time ago, so i have basic knowledge but not much. do you think i could keep up with story?

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Monarch_
Monarch_Lv5

So let me break down why I gave this review: Writing Quality: The authors writing quality is decent. It’s not making me gag, but at the same time it’s not the best writing I have ever seen. As such it’s a decent three for writing. Stability of Updats: The only reason I gave this a four is because honestly I don’t know how fast he updates, all I know is that he does. For me that at least warrants a four star. Story Development: This is where the story really starts disappointing me, like most other fan-fictions do. First of all the MC is far too OP. He is a rank 57 when he is what 12 and his true combat ability is even better then that. The only advantage he has is his strong spirit and his previous memories yet he learnt the art of hidden weapons by HIMSELF WND better then the genius tang san. HOW DOES THAT EVEN MAKE SENSE. Not only that, I fee like Ryusei is almost the same as Tang SAN. Spirit Hall killed his parents, he treats tang hao as a father figure and he is in shriek academy. That’s not even the end of my complaints. I mean why is the author shipping with essentially every female in the Shrek academy. I don’t even get that!!! One of my favourites part of the original novel was Rong Rong and Oscars love story but now as a twelve year old she is already dreaming of making him her husband. And just a small portion of my complaints. Character Design: The character design is even worse than the story development. I mean one of the most fundamental responsibilities of an author is to make the reader relate to the MC but this author seems to be doing the opposite. At first Ryusei was too soft and ***** which I honestly did not mind as it was a good change of pace for me. BUT THEN THE SPIRIT HALL ATTACKED. Now the guy seems to be constantly going through puberty and is extremely unreasonable. He is the main reason that I can’t even bear to finish the story, though I did get pretty deep into it already. Finally the world design: What can I even give this??? This is a fan fiction and up-till now the author has not added anything new to the world that would push up the rating to a three or four star. Overall the story really only deserves a two star.

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