Item: Lightning Dragon God Douluo: - A Douluo Dalu Fanfic
Rating: 5
Author: ElionAVL

ElionAVLLv66yr

2018-11-04 13:54

Shamelessly going to give Evil_Dragon a 5 stars, since I believe this fanfiction has a lot of potential. It's worth a read, and you probably won't be disappointed by it at all.

Lightning Dragon God Douluo: - A Douluo Dalu Fanfic

Evil_Dragon

4.2

112 Chs

Liked by 18 people

Replies3

BartzabelLv11

Hi Abyssal~ I love your fan-fics~

6yr

True_Cosmic_LordLv4

4 years and still so little chapters and even droped it .

2yr

ElionAVLLv6

it's time u move on

True_Cosmic_Lord:4 years and still so little chapters and even droped it .

2yr

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Evil_DragonAuthor

The author here, well, i am obviously giving myself a five star and to tell you about the novel. The MC will have twin spirits and both of them will be Dragon Spirits. This won't be a harem novel and it will only have mc x rongrong. I will obviously add some H-scenes when both of them are of age. So, guys support this novel and also let it reach the top 20 in the ranking.

6yr

Monarch_Lv5

So let me break down why I gave this review: Writing Quality: The authors writing quality is decent. It’s not making me gag, but at the same time it’s not the best writing I have ever seen. As such it’s a decent three for writing. Stability of Updats: The only reason I gave this a four is because honestly I don’t know how fast he updates, all I know is that he does. For me that at least warrants a four star. Story Development: This is where the story really starts disappointing me, like most other fan-fictions do. First of all the MC is far too OP. He is a rank 57 when he is what 12 and his true combat ability is even better then that. The only advantage he has is his strong spirit and his previous memories yet he learnt the art of hidden weapons by HIMSELF WND better then the genius tang san. HOW DOES THAT EVEN MAKE SENSE. Not only that, I fee like Ryusei is almost the same as Tang SAN. Spirit Hall killed his parents, he treats tang hao as a father figure and he is in shriek academy. That’s not even the end of my complaints. I mean why is the author shipping with essentially every female in the Shrek academy. I don’t even get that!!! One of my favourites part of the original novel was Rong Rong and Oscars love story but now as a twelve year old she is already dreaming of making him her husband. And just a small portion of my complaints. Character Design: The character design is even worse than the story development. I mean one of the most fundamental responsibilities of an author is to make the reader relate to the MC but this author seems to be doing the opposite. At first Ryusei was too soft and ***** which I honestly did not mind as it was a good change of pace for me. BUT THEN THE SPIRIT HALL ATTACKED. Now the guy seems to be constantly going through puberty and is extremely unreasonable. He is the main reason that I can’t even bear to finish the story, though I did get pretty deep into it already. Finally the world design: What can I even give this??? This is a fan fiction and up-till now the author has not added anything new to the world that would push up the rating to a three or four star. Overall the story really only deserves a two star.

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AkoParinToLv10

since you are the author of one of my fave. original novel. i will shamelessly give this a 5 stars rate. hoping that this will be good if not better as your first novel.

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ProcrastinateLv11

Rushed cliche revenge with no point Mentaly retarded characters and dip sh it Mc ................. . . .v.v.. .v.v. . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . .

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SunMoonandstarLv5

I dont really like the mc mindset, but to manipulate their comrade like that???,, its fine for mc to growing hate SH well u are the writer we are the reader,, dont take it to heart,, chill

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ArqemiLv12

Want some points? 1-slow update with already existent content to copy from(TRUE) 2-why is this going for romantic way that doulou did? I would rather see one POV of romance between mc and rr not anyone else or harem with the mc???? 3- why the **** is the mc still not transforming? What the faq is going on? 4- are you sure you have read the story? 5- and dam he is not even looking at 60-90000 years old spirits on his 6th ring? 6-my god can you put them both in the same room? Romance needs a notch up. 7-and why the faq is this guy not utilzing good materials for hidden weapons?! 8-you are doing filler chapters at max slow pace? Howmuch are you packing at your patreon? Do you think you would earn a fortune this way? Its becoming less enjoyable how stupid you are writing, acting and thinking. 🤔 overall this is beyond stupid, truly one more push and dropped, its just that bad WITH EXISTENT CONTNT TOO, do you see how funny this is? If i wasnt in college i would probably do some stories that stomp this.

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lazyleoLv7

Awesome novel.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 Keep up the great work. 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 Is it 140 yet? Not yet it seems. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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SenseisanLv13

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