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ElionAVL5dCommentedgoat, vomit on that bum 30yo unemployed middle aged son of a bum who is unmarried
All over Kamisato Ayato.- ElionAVL2mthCommentedCh 2 Chapter 2: Daemon Realm
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Where do you live where a 26yo who looks 17-18 looks like a shota?
Plus, his figure is concealed by his clothes, making him look like a delectable, oversized Shota. - ElionAVL2mthReplied to Sidius_Cross
Here's a fun fact, if you look behind her back, just below her nape there's a key hole.
Nolan got slightly dumbfounded. Wasn't Catherine an android? She actually has good feelings? Does she really have her own consciousness or intelligence? - ElionAVL2mthCommented
Rather than being lazy about managing and ruling, Venti was more lazy towards the act of learning how to lead his people, he knew he wasn't adequately equipped with the wisdom to do such, so he delegated it to people he trusted would, sometimes it backfired, most of the time it didnt.
Outstandingly hands-off, sounded nice when phrased as freedom. Actually, he was too lazy managing anything. - ElionAVL2mthCommented
Brother, you gotta have a few loose screws in the head to want to live in Teyvat. It's literally a nuke waiting to explode, there's so much tension all around and hardly any happy and safe place to live in. Even in Mondstadt there's hillichurl and slimes everywhere, Sumeru is full of mercenaries and fatui not to mention the Sages, Inazuma... let's not even talk about them. Fountaine? I don't wanna die from the prophecy. Liyue? Anywhere outside the harbor is #awks, even chenyu vale has too many beasts. it's not a GOOD world to live by any means.
He had long yearned for Teyvat while playing the game - what child doesn't love to fantasize? So when he suddenly crossed over into Teyvat, he had no doubts or disbelief about accepting this reality. - ElionAVL2mthPosted
Overall, average. There is not much fleshing done to characters, I like the fact the author used less notable and minor characters for MC's team, but MC himself is the least interesting part of this story. He is a Gary Stue, this guy has no personality to himself besides being "cool" and "strong". Author tries to negate it a few times but overall it simply does not change the fact this series is just waiting for the MC to put the finishing blow because he is massively clear of the Generation of Miracles. But he does try, and there are a good few scenes so I won't do this injustice it by giving it a 3. By webnovel standards this is a good fanfic.
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Respect sure went a long way through, bro held meetings with the dude who tried to kidnap his wife [img=faceslap]
This chapter has been deleted. - ElionAVL5mthReplied to Shadow1_Ch 22 Chapter 21
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with that gap in points, this might be the funniest statement i could ever hear from an opponent
After the shoot, I looked at Kise Ryota's surprised expression. "Don't think you can easily win this game," I said to him with a determined face. - ElionAVL6mthCommented
he's stupid .
"Hell yah so for my last wish I wish for more curse energy than Okkotsu Yuta" I said very excitedly. - ElionAVL6mthCommentedCh 11 Ch 11
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Rosalyne is just a bum, imaging going mad because your husband died... doing his job. These ppl always love the freedom granted by Venti, until it's time to actually fight.
This boss seemed to know everything about the buried past of Mondstadt's land. Rosalyne was indeed the lady's real name. Hundreds of years ago, before the Abyssal Catastrophe descended, she was once an innocent and lively girl with a brilliant life and cherished loved ones. Until that disaster shattered everything, and Rosalyne lost everything. She transformed into the Flame Witch, swearing to burn away all her pain. At that time, Venti, as the God of Wind, didn't return in time to protect his people, despite the chaotic situation and the risk of falling even for a being of the caliber of the Seven. His return at the last moment to battle the corrupted dragon Dvalin alongside him was already a desperate effort. For this, he fell into a deep sleep for five hundred years. However, morally speaking, he did owe Rosalyne. So, Venti intended to "give" the Heart of the God to Rosalyne, who was now the lady, in a somewhat reluctant manner. It could be considered as some compensation for the events of that time. - ElionAVL6mthCommented
Technically Kurama isn't a Fox, he's a chakra construct
"The audacity to draw such a hideous nine-tailed fox. I need to teach him a lesson later." There was a glint in her eyes as she said. - ElionAVL6mthReplied to Neo_Infinity
inazuma archon quest was way shorter than it should've been, and the quests were laughably bad, like probably worst of any archon quest acts
And the most attractive thing about her appearance is… THE CLEAVAGE AND THIGHS! - ElionAVL6mthReplied to KsoGhost
Whether Raiden or Venti is stronger is irrelevant to the conversation, Venti can do to Signora what Raiden did to Signora just as easily.
"That gun on your holster proves this point." She pointed at Isaac's gun as she said this. She then pointed at herself, "Besides, who would even dare to harm me? I am the God of Justice! Whoever tries to harm me shall face divine retribution! So who has the guts?" - ElionAVL6mthReplied to Alise11
The bard purposely didn't fight back la, the guy literally can throw mountains at people, there's no way Signora who got one-shot by Raiden would ever actually beat Venti
"That gun on your holster proves this point." She pointed at Isaac's gun as she said this. She then pointed at herself, "Besides, who would even dare to harm me? I am the God of Justice! Whoever tries to harm me shall face divine retribution! So who has the guts?" - ElionAVL6mthCommented
zhongli would be hilarious but tbf a bit too prolific. maybe one of the adepti or shenhe
'I wonder, will the next person that comes be from Liyue?' She made an educative guess as she looked at the door. However, contrary to her expectations, no one else entered.