BAD grammar, its almost unreadable, my eyes bleed, MOTHER OF ORTHOGRAPHY. NO, I was honestly interested based on the reviews, they LIE, I admit is a very unique interpretation but it can't be read at peace.
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LIKEThe "pellet" collection, i had seen it somewhere else, so i don't think this is his own or maybe he posted it somewhere else, but seriously, grammar es really bad, like, no connectors, its worse than caveman, also, even auto corrector works better so he is just lazy, he doesnt even has the pokemon names right. piggie and magnetite are just wrong.
Bad grammar that it's* almost unreadable. My eyes bled*, Mother of Orthography!* No, I was honestly interested based on *what i read* from the reviews, they lied*/they're lying*, I admit that* it's* a very unique portrayal* but it can't be read at peace. (interpretetation is how someone understands something, portrayal is a more apt term in this context) * means correction. Make sure you do it right before you tell someone to do so.
I read through your post history and your grammar isn’t great either.
😂 half of Webnovel so call “critics” and “true reviewers” are hypocrite. Honestly there’s no point in pointing at them since they will just bullshit their way out of it- it’s that or just going off topic in an arguing to make themself less pitiful. Funny thing is, none of those fools ever wrote a fanfiction much less a novel. You will only understand the struggle when you invest your time and effort in being an author.
True. BUT, in this case it is correct that the authors spelling is atrocious. I.e. Doing things doing things Like writing piggy instead of pidgey for 2+ chapters straight
XD I know when instances like that happened, you know it's possible he could write it on his phone- where autocorrect kicked in- but when you mentioned 2 chapters+... yeah my doubt is there. I mean I'm not that good at spelling either, reason why I only pointed out mistake in the comment so the author could correct it instead of posting it as a review, it's only when the author ignore the corrections in spelling that I give up hope.
Your corrections weren’t that great either.. Also, you don’t need to be a professional soccer player to appreciate a good match.
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