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Ulloa
UlloaLv56yr
2018-11-08 12:10

BAD grammar, its almost unreadable, my eyes bleed, MOTHER OF ORTHOGRAPHY. NO, I was honestly interested based on the reviews, they LIE, I admit is a very unique interpretation but it can't be read at peace.

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Benevolent_One
Benevolent_OneLv6

The first line had me, I hoped it was just one line but reality proved to be different. Some people can't fully express what's on their mind in writing.

Ulloa
UlloaLv5

The "pellet" collection, i had seen it somewhere else, so i don't think this is his own or maybe he posted it somewhere else, but seriously, grammar es really bad, like, no connectors, its worse than caveman, also, even auto corrector works better so he is just lazy, he doesnt even has the pokemon names right. piggie and magnetite are just wrong.

Benevolent_One:The first line had me, I hoped it was just one line but reality proved to be different. Some people can't fully express what's on their mind in writing.
Mortifer
MortiferLv14

Bad grammar that it's* almost unreadable. My eyes bled*, Mother of Orthography!* No, I was honestly interested based on *what i read* from the reviews, they lied*/they're lying*, I admit that* it's* a very unique portrayal* but it can't be read at peace. (interpretetation is how someone understands something, portrayal is a more apt term in this context) * means correction. Make sure you do it right before you tell someone to do so.

Ajiwun
AjiwunLv3

Exactly

Immortal_Potato
Immortal_PotatoLv6

I read through your post history and your grammar isn’t great either.

Mortifer:Bad grammar that it's* almost unreadable. My eyes bled*, Mother of Orthography!* No, I was honestly interested based on *what i read* from the reviews, they lied*/they're lying*, I admit that* it's* a very unique portrayal* but it can't be read at peace. (interpretetation is how someone understands something, portrayal is a more apt term in this context) * means correction. Make sure you do it right before you tell someone to do so.
Mortifer
MortiferLv14

But i don't tell someone to do it right. Except cases like these with as*holes who feel like they're better than the author. There's a difference between casually posting and correcting others.

Immortal_Potato:I read through your post history and your grammar isn’t great either.
Mortifer
MortiferLv14

But i don't tell someone to do it right. Except cases like these with as*holes who feel like they're better than the author. There's a difference between casually posting and correcting others.

Immortal_Potato:I read through your post history and your grammar isn’t great either.
Immortal_Potato
Immortal_PotatoLv6

*shrugs* Just makes you seem like a hypocrite.

Mortifer:But i don't tell someone to do it right. Except cases like these with as*holes who feel like they're better than the author. There's a difference between casually posting and correcting others.
Mortifer
MortiferLv14

Nahh. Just showing him his place. And don't start pointing fingers, i'm not the bad guy here

Immortal_Potato:*shrugs* Just makes you seem like a hypocrite.
Oniichan_Thickskin
Oniichan_ThickskinLv13

😂 half of Webnovel so call “critics” and “true reviewers” are hypocrite. Honestly there’s no point in pointing at them since they will just bullshit their way out of it- it’s that or just going off topic in an arguing to make themself less pitiful. Funny thing is, none of those fools ever wrote a fanfiction much less a novel. You will only understand the struggle when you invest your time and effort in being an author.

Immortal_Potato:*shrugs* Just makes you seem like a hypocrite.
Oniichan_Thickskin
Oniichan_ThickskinLv13

And daoist potato, why you no level 6 yet? Aren’t an immortal potato?

Immortal_Potato:*shrugs* Just makes you seem like a hypocrite.
SpaceLaser
SpaceLaserLv14

True. BUT, in this case it is correct that the authors spelling is atrocious. I.e. Doing things doing things Like writing piggy instead of pidgey for 2+ chapters straight

Oniichan_Thickskin:😂 half of Webnovel so call “critics” and “true reviewers” are hypocrite. Honestly there’s no point in pointing at them since they will just bullshit their way out of it- it’s that or just going off topic in an arguing to make themself less pitiful. Funny thing is, none of those fools ever wrote a fanfiction much less a novel. You will only understand the struggle when you invest your time and effort in being an author.
Oniichan_Thickskin
Oniichan_ThickskinLv13

XD I know when instances like that happened, you know it's possible he could write it on his phone- where autocorrect kicked in- but when you mentioned 2 chapters+... yeah my doubt is there. I mean I'm not that good at spelling either, reason why I only pointed out mistake in the comment so the author could correct it instead of posting it as a review, it's only when the author ignore the corrections in spelling that I give up hope.

SpaceLaser:True. BUT, in this case it is correct that the authors spelling is atrocious. I.e. Doing things doing things Like writing piggy instead of pidgey for 2+ chapters straight
Sythcake
SythcakeLv6

Your corrections weren’t that great either.. Also, you don’t need to be a professional soccer player to appreciate a good match.

Mortifer:Bad grammar that it's* almost unreadable. My eyes bled*, Mother of Orthography!* No, I was honestly interested based on *what i read* from the reviews, they lied*/they're lying*, I admit that* it's* a very unique portrayal* but it can't be read at peace. (interpretetation is how someone understands something, portrayal is a more apt term in this context) * means correction. Make sure you do it right before you tell someone to do so.
Mortifer
MortiferLv14

But it's better than what he did. And holy ****, i'm the bad guy? Lol i'm just throwing back to him what he threw to the author

Sythcake:Your corrections weren’t that great either.. Also, you don’t need to be a professional soccer player to appreciate a good match.
Mortifer
MortiferLv14

But it's better than what he did. And holy ****, i'm the bad guy? Lol i'm just throwing back to him what he threw to the author

Sythcake:Your corrections weren’t that great either.. Also, you don’t need to be a professional soccer player to appreciate a good match.
senkii
senkiiLv6

Noooo

Immortal_Potato:I read through your post history and your grammar isn’t great either.
senkii
senkiiLv6

Noooo

Immortal_Potato:I read through your post history and your grammar isn’t great either.
senkii
senkiiLv6

Noooo

Immortal_Potato:I read through your post history and your grammar isn’t great either.
senkii
senkiiLv6

Like

Oniichan_Thickskin:😂 half of Webnovel so call “critics” and “true reviewers” are hypocrite. Honestly there’s no point in pointing at them since they will just bullshit their way out of it- it’s that or just going off topic in an arguing to make themself less pitiful. Funny thing is, none of those fools ever wrote a fanfiction much less a novel. You will only understand the struggle when you invest your time and effort in being an author.
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