There is one unsolved mysteries In Pokémon where Pokémon eggs came from And how do Pokémon mate.... And why there are no romance in this series And last who is ash's father???????

BAD grammar, its almost unreadable, my eyes bleed, MOTHER OF ORTHOGRAPHY. NO, I was honestly interested based on the reviews, they LIE, I admit is a very unique interpretation but it can't be read at peace.

I love that you made a Pokémon based novel and sorry that I’m using this not for review but to ask my own question. In my opinion Pokémon are dangerous and powerful beings that can kill humans with relative ease even with weak moves like nuzzle or poison sting. This always baffled me but, It is hard to imagine that the people would let their children go on a journey to become Pokémon master when even a little bug Pokémon can kill them upon encounter. Sure the human can make friends with Pokémon to help fight other Pokémons but the power they displayed during fights could stray from their path and hit you or your Pokémon kill you accidentally while playing either physically or through super power abilities like ash and pikachu when pikachu shock ash like literally every episode with the force of a lightning bolt or maybe a machop wanted a hug and crush your spine by accident cause they are very strong in comparison to humans. Reply if you have any opinions

Really wanted to like this novel. I picked it up and dropped it 3 times before ultimately giving up. The spelling and grammar is so bad it’s literally headache inducing, it’s why I kept stopping after coming back. I did like that it was more in line with the manga version of Pokémon were people and Pokémon can and will die, sometimes brutally. However, the addition of bad wuxia tropes like ‘powerful families’ and ‘arrogant antagonists’ destroy the good parts as they feel alien and very, very wrong for a Pokémon novel.

Pls. Do not drop this story. And when are you going to pdate author san. Pleaseplseasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseeasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseeasepleasepleasepleasepleaseeapleasedd

by far the best pokemon fan-fic for me I like this better than "journey towards greatness" this fan-fic might be a little brutal for a lot of people and pokemons dying but this is more realistic I mean come on, on the first season of pokemon ash ran to the pokemon center because Pikachu is very injured and might die if not healed quickly but then in the following episodes every injuries life threatening or not can be remedied buy just going inside a pokeball.. and that's ok cause the show was for the eyes of children but now that it was a fan-fic where the viewer are probably at the appropriate age to know reality this is not going to be a bad influence... I mean come on a lot of fan-fics have a mature content, r-18 , and some are just plain hentai so I rate this novel 25/25 stars

I started the novel but couldn't get past first few chapters due to serious disregard for Grammar and writing style. Honestly it's quite frustrating to read.

Great story, one of the best fanfics of pokemon to date. Good job. By the way, in what timeline does this novel take place? In the megaevolution timeline or in the normal timeline that end in Pokemon black and white 2 ? I have my doubs, I mean, it's base in the anime+gamea+manga ? Or only one of those previously mentioned?. Well good job non the less and keep going Whit this exelente work, If my country wasn't as poor as it is I would happily support you on patron hahahaha.

The world may be based of the pre-existing world of pokemon but the author has taken it in a unique and slightly darker directing. Personally this is how I invision the pokemon world would be like in real life. He also adds a depth to the world the actual series doesnt have. The grammer in it and sentence structure is slightly lacking. But to me personally this is the best pokemon fan fiction this app currently has. I cant wait to see this world expand and sincerely hope the author doesnt drop the novel.