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Admist
AdmistLv56yr
2018-12-03 23:51

Hello Author, I have been decided that I will be your greatest fan. Don't mind other's review. This story is awesome and unlike others novelI the MC didn't change the plot, which I love the most. I also like the characters and their way of showing emotion, just like in anime. I hope that you will not drop this story like what others do to their story. What a waste of potential masterpiece. I am a little bit excited about his journey to other worlds or divine worlds it there is. I support you author, please keep writing

A Warrior's Path

DreAm_b0At
4.0
288 Chs

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ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6

I can honestly say that all the bad reviews were telling me not to read this BUT I thought, can it really be THAT bad and be on the ranking? Someone has the vote for it and I doubt any author will make enough accounts to vote his own. So here I scroll down and I saw your review and once I read this "the MC didn't change the plot" I decided I will NOT read this. Original plot??? I can go read the original.

6yr
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Admist
AdmistLv5

I think you misunderstand something, yeah he did not change the plot(Dramastically). Honestly you have to read it first before you judge. Like the saying goes "Dont judge the book by its cover(other's review). Everyone has their own taste. Maybe you will find it interesting.

6yr
AsuraMonarch
AsuraMonarchLv6

Dramastically? Is that even a word? I think you meant dramatically. First of all Drake is supposed to be this super badass soldier that has withstood the vicissitudes of war. Then he got transmigrated with 360 int and 355 wis (been a while since I read I was just curious why the rating has gone up so much) as it says he was a wise and intelligent man. Then in a moment of childlike *****ty he spends alot of points in helping characters he hasn't even met yet! Like it is already predetermined that said characters would br friends or lovers of MC. Then you mention he doesn't change the original plot all that much. REALLY? IF KUSHINA IS ALIVE THEN THINGS DON'T CHANGE? things could've gone differently in more ways than one. Better childhood for naruto but since he is retarded then boohoo. 2 she could maybe or atleast help the hokage against the shinobi council. There are many more things that could happen and I'm not including the fanfiction cliches of mikoto and kushin at bffs or kushina is a kenjutsu master. I am not even sure if those are canon...

Admist:I think you misunderstand something, yeah he did not change the plot(Dramastically). Honestly you have to read it first before you judge. Like the saying goes "Dont judge the book by its cover(other's review). Everyone has their own taste. Maybe you will find it interesting.
6yr
4
AsuraMonarch
AsuraMonarchLv6

Dramastically? Is that even a word? I think you meant dramatically. First of all Drake is supposed to be this super badass soldier that has withstood the vicissitudes of war. Then he got transmigrated with 360 int and 355 wis (been a while since I read I was just curious why the rating has gone up so much) as it says he was a wise and intelligent man. Then in a moment of childlike *****ty he spends alot of points in helping characters he hasn't even met yet! Like it is already predetermined that said characters would br friends or lovers of MC. Then you mention he doesn't change the original plot all that much. REALLY? IF KUSHINA IS ALIVE THEN THINGS DON'T CHANGE? things could've gone differently in more ways than one. Better childhood for naruto but since he is retarded then boohoo. 2 she could maybe or atleast help the hokage against the shinobi council. There are many more things that could happen and I'm not including the fanfiction cliches of mikoto and kushin at bffs or kushina is a kenjutsu master. I am not even sure if those are canon...

Admist:I think you misunderstand something, yeah he did not change the plot(Dramastically). Honestly you have to read it first before you judge. Like the saying goes "Dont judge the book by its cover(other's review). Everyone has their own taste. Maybe you will find it interesting.
6yr
1
ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6

This is an old post, very very old. Other than the fact that this novel appears to be abandoned it is a great novel. It's been some time so I vaguely remember, it did not start the best but it is very good later on, and by that I mean a few chapters not 20+.

ErozothDraeor:I can honestly say that all the bad reviews were telling me not to read this BUT I thought, can it really be THAT bad and be on the ranking? Someone has the vote for it and I doubt any author will make enough accounts to vote his own. So here I scroll down and I saw your review and once I read this "the MC didn't change the plot" I decided I will NOT read this. Original plot??? I can go read the original.
4yr
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HungryForChapters
HungryForChaptersLv4

Reveal spoiler

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chrissichris19
chrissichris19Lv14

The story started with one of the best premise ever but then the MC became one of the most hypocritical person ever and the dumbest MC you can see (all while being reincarnated with 360 intelligence and 325 wisdom) which doesn't make any sense. That's not the worst. The main problem is that the author doesn't interact with the readers. He'll see the questions and reviews but just answer the ones who benefit him or say "you'll see later" and expect us to just forget about the problem in the story. Even if you're gonna tell us to scram because it's your story and you do what you want at least say it so we can leave instead of making us expect a change which isn't going to happen.

6yr
Hahadavis
HahadavisLv5

Heto complex mc 😑, spending all his points on people he doesn't know but not his parents and you call him a genius 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

6yr
Cabul
CabulLv4

This garbage is included in the popular list?! What's with this world? Are you guys dumb or what? This is really ridiculous! Even 2 stars aren't worth it! BLEH! Garbage... Yes! This is suitable to describe this sh*t! The quality of your writing is bad enough to kill me if I keep reading it. Wasting karma points for strangers, you haven't even been born but you just give them many things! And are you even sure you will born in Konoha? And what did you give to your parents? NOTHING! You're not a good person, just an idiot. *WARNING Don't waste your time here

6yr
Atalkingrock
AtalkingrockLv14

I'm I'm complete agreement for in hungry for chapters, except he doesnt mention how messy the writing looks. Its not grammar but your eyes will slowly die while reading it.

6yr
InnerVoice
InnerVoiceLv6

Ranghess is being fucking shameless spamming 5 stars for over and over. This story is trash with a capital T. It’s utter garbage okay? The story is all over the place with **** tons of flaws in the plot and the time skip happens really often as well. If you are reading this, rate a 1 Star and leave because the 5 stars on the rating is a sham

6yr
Hypnosxs
HypnosxsLv13

Is the Gay MC tag joke? i didnt finish reading yet he already getting the second wife >.< i feel cheated >.< ____________________________________________________________________________________

6yr
Petrifly
PetriflyLv10

Pretty disappointed with how the novel turned out especially so early on in the novel. Most of the problems i had is already addressed by the top negative reviewer. TLDR - Dumb af MC - MC personality doesn't match after reincarnating (feels like a whole new character) - Plotholes

6yr
LandUpGaming
LandUpGamingLv13

Spent 15 days in the womb, goes unconscious for 8 months and 15 days (at this point he should only have a day at most before it hits 9 months) still has to spend 50 more days in the womb. So according to the author it takes around 10 3/4ish months to be born, can't even get something so ****** right.

6yr
Ruler_Of_Heaven
Ruler_Of_HeavenLv4

Wtf with this fan-fic spammed his own novel 5 star review with alt account have some shame bro! This is the most shameless author that I ever seen!

6yr
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