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Cabul
CabulLv46yr
2018-11-04 04:24

This garbage is included in the popular list?! What's with this world? Are you guys dumb or what? This is really ridiculous! Even 2 stars aren't worth it! BLEH! Garbage... Yes! This is suitable to describe this sh*t! The quality of your writing is bad enough to kill me if I keep reading it. Wasting karma points for strangers, you haven't even been born but you just give them many things! And are you even sure you will born in Konoha? And what did you give to your parents? NOTHING! You're not a good person, just an idiot. *WARNING Don't waste your time here

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Teraphoenix
TeraphoenixLv12

how is he an idiot ? that he spent's many points on others? that's so can get more later called investment. and about not giving his parents any benefits what should he give them they are going to be almost immortal at a later point and would you give your superpowers even if they don't want to? you are the dumb one and I don't care if you say that in my writing are many mistakes Im not even native to this language and do this as a hobby but people which hate good novels without reading more than 5 or so shouldn't write a review and also its his first writing there can be mistakes FOR GODS SAKE!

Cabul
CabulLv4

you're obviously the Dumbest! The fool is still in the womb! But he gave strength to some Konoha ninjas ?! Wth? Did he know that he would be born in Konoha?? what if he would be born in another village and become an enemy? Will he say "Hey your strength is what I gave when I was in the fetus, don't fight, let's be friends" Really? read the 5 chapters I've found a big hole, big enough until I feel disgusted to read the next chapter, I'm afraid my brain cells are affected. Well if you read this novel while turning off your brain then I won't say anything.

Teraphoenix:how is he an idiot ? that he spent's many points on others? that's so can get more later called investment. and about not giving his parents any benefits what should he give them they are going to be almost immortal at a later point and would you give your superpowers even if they don't want to? you are the dumb one and I don't care if you say that in my writing are many mistakes Im not even native to this language and do this as a hobby but people which hate good novels without reading more than 5 or so shouldn't write a review and also its his first writing there can be mistakes FOR GODS SAKE!
DuchessPrick
DuchessPrickLv4

I like it when they don't reply

Cabul:you're obviously the Dumbest! The fool is still in the womb! But he gave strength to some Konoha ninjas ?! Wth? Did he know that he would be born in Konoha?? what if he would be born in another village and become an enemy? Will he say "Hey your strength is what I gave when I was in the fetus, don't fight, let's be friends" Really? read the 5 chapters I've found a big hole, big enough until I feel disgusted to read the next chapter, I'm afraid my brain cells are affected. Well if you read this novel while turning off your brain then I won't say anything.
okyo
okyoLv4

Same here.

DuchessPrick:I like it when they don't reply
okyo
okyoLv4

Same here.

DuchessPrick:I like it when they don't reply
The10thCrow
The10thCrowLv14

Enemy has been destroyed

DuchessPrick:I like it when they don't reply
The10thCrow
The10thCrowLv14

Enemy has been destroyed

DuchessPrick:I like it when they don't reply
linchufeng
linchufengLv14

Hey, this is his story, not yours why da **** you even bothered about it, it's up to him what he going to write..if you don't like it just buzz off find your best story if not just shut up, don't be such a ***** will ya..annoying stranger. Your not satisfied write your own story.

Cabul:you're obviously the Dumbest! The fool is still in the womb! But he gave strength to some Konoha ninjas ?! Wth? Did he know that he would be born in Konoha?? what if he would be born in another village and become an enemy? Will he say "Hey your strength is what I gave when I was in the fetus, don't fight, let's be friends" Really? read the 5 chapters I've found a big hole, big enough until I feel disgusted to read the next chapter, I'm afraid my brain cells are affected. Well if you read this novel while turning off your brain then I won't say anything.
LizodIDK
LizodIDKLv12

If anything you're the annoying stranger, so am I but I will use your logic against you. Why are you even bothered about it, it's up to him what he is going to review, if you don't like it just buzz off and go reply to those annoying 5 star reviews that say worthless sh*t. If you're not satisfied go write your own review.

linchufeng:Hey, this is his story, not yours why da **** you even bothered about it, it's up to him what he going to write..if you don't like it just buzz off find your best story if not just shut up, don't be such a ***** will ya..annoying stranger. Your not satisfied write your own story.
linchufeng
linchufengLv14

Lol wtf is wrong with you people, buzz off write your own novel let others judge u back n feel what u have done to others...the u would know when u in their shoes. BITCH

MurderKing
MurderKingLv5

Are you the type of guy that read all 4000 chapters of martial god asura and the entirety of Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God? You don't even care about wether it is bad or not. That's why your defending this crap, and cussing at others for expressing their opinion about it. Actually I should be cussing you out because your expressing negative opinion towards a person right now. If I were you that is.

linchufeng:Lol wtf is wrong with you people, buzz off write your own novel let others judge u back n feel what u have done to others...the u would know when u in their shoes. BITCH
linchufeng
linchufengLv14

Yup, I am the type of guy who read all the 4000* chapter...why you got the problem with it, I like this kind of adventure lol if ya don't like it shu...shu....go find another story... I don't know why there's a lot of people that envy or hate other people works if ya don't like it just drop it n leave! Why should you bother here waste your time. Shu please lets other who like this kind of story.

linchufeng
linchufengLv14

Yup, I am the type of guy who read all the 4000* chapter...why you got the problem with it, I like this kind of adventure lol if ya don't like it shu...shu....go find another story... I don't know why there's a lot of people that envy or hate other people works if ya don't like it just drop it n leave! Why should you bother here waste your time. Shu please lets other who like this kind of story.

linchufeng
linchufengLv14

Yup, I am the type of guy who read all the 4000* chapter...why you got the problem with it, I like this kind of adventure lol if ya don't like it shu...shu....go find another story... I don't know why there's a lot of people that envy or hate other people works if ya don't like it just drop it n leave! Why should you bother here waste your time. Shu please lets other who like this kind of story.

linchufeng
linchufengLv14

Yup, I am the type of guy who read all the 4000* chapter...why you got the problem with it, I like this kind of adventure lol if ya don't like it shu...shu....go find another story... I don't know why there's a lot of people that envy or hate other people works if ya don't like it just drop it n leave! Why should you bother here waste your time. Shu please lets other who like this kind of story.

linchufeng
linchufengLv14

Yup, I am the type of guy who read all the 4000* chapter...why you got the problem with it, I like this kind of adventure lol if ya don't like it shu...shu....go find another story... I don't know why there's a lot of people that envy or hate other people works if ya don't like it just drop it n leave! Why should you bother here waste your time. Shu please lets other who like this kind of story.

linchufeng
linchufengLv14

Lol i hate there a time when lagging happen ****...

ExtraMeat
ExtraMeatLv3

Lmao underrated comment

The10thCrow:Enemy has been destroyed
YuuRin
YuuRinLv6

You are the idiot one. Seems webnovel needs to check on these people who spam clone account to degrade few novels. It becomes so toxic this year

supremeboop_daoist
supremeboop_daoistLv12

We see his moral character in the beginning, and we know he's watched the anime so he must have people he favors and wishes to change. Its possible ghat he beloeved with the system it would be pretty easy to help his parents and without previous knowledge of them felt it would be weird to possibly drastically change theirs fates? Idk i liked this novl and just finished reading the latest chapter

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